Singularity21

Singularity21

male LV 5

The singularity born from the collision of storms

2018-08-13 Se unió United States
Insignias 8

Moments 117
Singularity21
Singularity21
1 months ago
Commented

The sorry feels so forced , especially Sirius’ death, he could’ve let atticus or others possess him way sooner, I mean he was obviously losing. Not using his talent is weak story telling. It’s fine to kill Sirius but this was purely forced plot. It was good until now too🫤

Singularity21
Singularity21
2 months ago
Commented

Shambles seems like a better name. Kind of like law’s ability.

Great Human Transformation—advanced magic that can instantly move oneself or others to any place within 50 meters around.

I've Become the King of Villains in the Game

I've Become the King of Villains in the Game

Games · Radish balls

Singularity21
Singularity21
3 months ago
Commented

Is author making the mc an idiot ? There’s no reason someone should be this stupid, if they were they should be dead. Even a pig would try to use the space talent. I feel like the author is treating the readers like brainless fools who can’t even notice forced plot.

Singularity21
Singularity21
3 months ago
Commented

I think you mean Lich. Witch demon doesn’t rascally sit well wit my the description from what I know about Liches

Some witch demons were transformed after their demise, having studied undead magic while alive and, due to their misdeeds and heavy resentments coupled with the effects of their spells, turned into witch demons after passing. Others were living mages who willingly pursued eternal life and thus turned into witch demons.

I Ascend to the Divine Throne through Arcane Means

I Ascend to the Divine Throne through Arcane Means

Games · Dangerous Tower Listening to Rain

Singularity21
Singularity21
4 months ago
Commented

How is M connected ? Lanlingster and augustus both have no M. The inconsistency is the biggest turnoff of this novel.😡

Singularity21
Singularity21
8 months ago
Commented

I can’t. I tried but the mc is an idiot. He fails to use his gift and asks permission for this and that. Thought he was supposed to be a king. It feels like a great gift was wasted on irredeemable trash taht a hi old just die. I feel like Licia has more personality than him. And while I’m at it let me add that his name if stupid too. Doesn’t have mc vibe. I ve seen extra’s with better names.

Singularity21
Singularity21
9 months ago
Replied to light_the_fox

True. Atleast Camilla’s situation could understood since it was her stepmom trying to protect her son or whatever. But this is just ridiculous.

But after only a moment of hesitation, she didn't hide anything and said: "I just realized that the Lionheart Family has never intended to let a woman take the helm, no matter how outstanding they are. If I obediently married as a political chip, I would still have some value. But I refused. And some of the elders in my family felt that I had no value if I didn't choose to marry, even seen as a threat, so they made their move. And my brothers are interested in stealing the 'hero fate'... Overall, there are many who don't want me to leave the ruins alive."

Catastrophe Card King

Catastrophe Card King

Games · Blindness

Singularity21
Singularity21
10 months ago
Commented

The amount of grammar mistakes. 🤦🏻‍♂️, pls get an editing software ( there’s a lot of free ones) . It really throws me off trying to understand what’s intended from what’s written.

Singularity21
Singularity21
11 months ago
Posted

The premise is good and I he system seems decent too but the speed of plot advancement and the irrelevance of cultivation throws you off. There’s no political intrigue. It’s more of a action cultivation novel where the mc is an emperor. The worst is the inconsistency in translation, which ranges from names of the empires, cultivation levels, characters and more. Even the mc’s name has a George in it at one point for some reason. In conclusion, even if the plot is decent with potential, the translation leaves it abysmal to read.

Singularity21
Singularity21
11 months ago
Commented

@author This book is so good. But there’s a lot of grammatical errors. It could be solved if you had grammarly or an editor, and would improve the quality of the writing drastically.