Ellesedil

Ellesedil

male LV 4

Just an avid reader. OK, an EXTREMELY avid ready

2018-07-01 Se unió Global
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29 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapters and the minor twist. Just don't burn yourself out with writing to fast.

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1 months ago
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Haven't gone back to look, but am I the only one commenting? Well, anyway..... Thanks again for the chapters!

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1 months ago
Posted

Only 14 chapters so far and we are still being introduced to the MC to what makes him, Well "him". Pacing is good, motives are somewhat clear but how can know 'everything' about another even our MC. This leaves things open for amazing, and maybe sometimes, stupid actions instead of a cookie cutter hero/anti-hero type. Give it a read to see if you agree or not.

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1 months ago
Replied to Zailo95

You do know that there are always idiots who think they are 'blessed' and can do what they want, no matter what. Right?

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1 months ago
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2 hard hitting chapters. Thank you for them.

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1 months ago
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Maturity isn't a number (age) but life experience, sadly our MC will get a bit to much as most MC's do. I hope you have him come around for his parents. I am a widower but can't really say I was a true husband (never cheated though). I am a father but also can't say I was a dad. We all have regrets but I hope your MC doesn't have that one with his parents.