99niloy

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99niloy
1 months ago
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It is not about preference but rather the limitation of the world-building. Also if you want to improve the idea of a power source you need to add some limitations like he needs to acquire some power source or to update the quality or quantity of the ability.

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99niloy
1 months ago
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I think the use of energy to improve the Pokemon IDEA is not a good one. The same storyline focusing more on the journey would have been better. Also, there are limitations such as what a Pokemon can learn and can concentrate on that would enrich the story more. Great work.

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    Harry potter and English Oak Bearer

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    I do not own Harry Potter. I have only tried to make a fan fiction for other to enjoy. We are the bearer of fate, we are the keeper of destiny, we are the teller of stories. Hear our words listen to our songs oh bearer of English Oak time for you to walk the road. Oh bearer of English Oak time for you to break the chain of crime release Qilin of time.

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