JFTrepon

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2018-06-25 Se unió France
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JFTrepon
JFTrepon
16 days ago
Replied to Wolf_God

How telling anyone about that kind of talent is smart ?

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
7 months ago
Commented

Your novel start to fast no introduction to the magical world or explication to why Félix is ok with a Magic school and Magic. For during the first 5 chapters no explication or stakes, confict, dilemma. Sorry english ins't my first language

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
10 months ago
Commented

Dear author, This arc about religion creating problem for ME. I can accept your critics of christians, muslims faith and you belief about dharmic and hindus. I can even accept the will to stop, controle and, or erase their influence in the empire. But rewriting a religion holy text is one of the worse thing too do. You can interprete them differently, use context for your avantage but changing text Big no.

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
JFTrepon
JFTrepon
2 years ago
Commented

Teen Wolf parodies, Hope you don't fall short

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
3 years ago
Commented

why take that much time to try to explain why the mc isn't a bad guy when he is a assasin ? Just accept what it is.

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JFTrepon
JFTrepon
3 years ago
Replied to purrplex

where did that come from ????

Immediately, a transparent barrier enveloped her, and a rocket launcher appeared on her shoulders.

Imperial Phoenix Rules

Imperial Phoenix Rules

Fantasy · Mo Qianlan

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
3 years ago
Replied to Fiaran

thanks you, you explation is very useful to people who aren't native in english.

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God´s Eyes

God´s Eyes

Urban · HideousGrain

JFTrepon
JFTrepon
4 years ago
Commented

one thing I don't understand is why je want to create a gang when he is already a prince

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