who'd have taught that reincarnation is unrealistic. but somehow you aren't questioning how the memories from his past self's brain got transferred to this other brain in a fictional universe
"Sara told me she saw him kill three men in a bar with a pen." John had thought the story exaggerated, Sara messing with him. Rosie less so
Fallout: Vault X
Video Games · FourPin
did I miss something? They are still in a game no? I mean sure they are trapped in the game and they'll die for real if they die but it's still a game and the mobs and npcs are still bundles of code.
The same way that the Goblins were no longer just 'bundles of code' meant for me to farm for experience and get stronger... they were real and were more than capable of terrible things; things that warranted the deep loathing I - and many others - have for them.
Twin Moons of Eden: Online
Fantasy · Ketsueki_Hasu
Small advise. you don't get more readers by being annoying. The only thing this wall of text does is make me eye-roll and speedscroll past it. I've never felt less tempted to read something or donate money. And it also kills my desire to continue reading. Maybe try looking at it from the viewers perspective.
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My name is Ben Parker (The Knight's Multiverse X MCU)
Movies · Calm_Wanderer
The story is well written but we're now at chapter 91 and the MC is still 14 years old and still figuring out his powers (not because he's just getting more and more powers) we've until now only had 1 mention of the name Blacksteel and that was only a vision from the future so I highly doubt that it will ever get to this point. Until now the mc didn't have any real reason to use his powers except for maybe 2 scenes. I also didn't see even one scene where I had the feeling, that the mc had an average intelligence not to mention above average. also the sex scenes are terrible I recommend skipping them(did I mention 14 yo?). It would probably be a 2 Star if it weren't for the update stability and the good writing quality
for me*
If you think that's how a person with a good heart acts I recommend therapy. Anyway that chapter really destroyed the story
Another problem would be that you don't have any copyright of this story whether you wrote it or not since this is a fanfic the copyright is with the copyright owners of cyberpunk 2077. So I doubt that webnovel will care since it's still a story uploaded here which means traffic for this website
Este libro ha sido eliminado.
Chapters keep getting shorter and shorter but atleast there are enough chapters for patreon. who writes fanfics to make money you literally could've written an original novel about a Zombie apocalypse and maybe even made money with it. well you'd have to write a lot more then you are now. well I'm not going to continue waiting a week for 5 sentences and I'm definitely not paying for a fanfic
Sorry, but I don't feel dumb reading your comment. You really shouldn't call people dumb and then immediately prove your own lack of intelligence—you're only embarrassing yourself. Not to mention, replying to a year-old comment just makes you seem desperate.
It would be their Stand By Me moment, Scott could be Jerry O'Connell and I would be River Phoenix! If they found the rest of the body, they'd be heroes.
Teen Wolf: Void Stiles
TV · Dark_Asmodeus