Hey author. I will give you an objective opinion not weighted by emotions. You have been constantly growing as a writer and it shows in the book. At first it was just interesting, but now you can submerge yourself in the storyline and get lost in it. I genuinely believe that with some adjustments that this book could be published and be in bookstores. That being said, never stop learning, and never stop growing.
Great book and I love reading it but unfortunately with you going premium it is too expensive to read. the cost of buying coins is ridiculous. It's an unfortunate thing and I wish you the best author. I've been here since the start and have enjoyed the world you have brought to life. It saddens me to see another wonderful book fall into the pay-to-read section but I hope they made you an offer worthy of your work
just a quick question to the author, why is this fight so prolonged? it's been 15 chapters I think. it almost feels like filler chapters considering the title of the book and the origional purpose of the system
I need more
lol I'm glad to see someone has some humor
I bet you were the kid in school to remind the teacher about homework
I was literally about to ask about this
did you ever think that Ragnar from Vikings was inspired by the story of Olaf?
Honestly author, you had me scared that you dropped the novel and went escaping into the darkness, never to be seen or heard from again. But I'm glad that isn't true.
Rise of a Finance Minister
Fantasy · MightyEagle