Kirshe

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Laziness lv: Supreme Being!

2018-05-09 Se unió Antarctica
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Kirshe
Kirshe
3 years ago
Posted

Fun book to read. The things that I feel annoyed is…. Most of the chapter is like a repetition to increase the words count. Which is annoying. Also based on the logic…. Many things doesn’t makes sense. For example, the previous host Mu Hongzi fallen because He got ambushed by Netherworld Prison people, that supposedly the highest cultivation level only reached Great Saint. And after Mu Hongzi resurrected, his actual cultivation almost reached the Heavengod level which is top peak God Emperor lol Author always emphasised that God level cultivation can kill them (Great Saint) like an ant. So how come Mu Hongzi could be killed (body) by them. Anyway, that’s not the only things that doesn’t makes sense. Tldr, I feel like giving the author a hit of hammer on his/her head. Meh, this is such a good World Background, but the author can’t keep up with the writing. Alas, this is Webnovel so author won’t able to read this review/comment. Nevertheless, it was a good read. Story Developments, only average as the Author doing so many repetition, which burns my brain cells. Character Design, only average as the Author writing not consistent. (Many times) World Background, not full mark as I can’t give it full marks if I need to skip the brain burning repetition story telling.

Kirshe
Kirshe
4 years ago
Commented

Still waiting for the update until now 😭