XiaoMai

... there are a lot of points that needed to be improved, but I know that the author will grow in the future anyway. Indeed, just as the other reviews in this book, it is completely lacking. The grammar, syntax, punctuation, whatever you called it, are all over the place. I would like for the author to also read, study the language, and focus on improving the grammar first. It will be a huge jump from your starting line. However, don't be too hasty. You should continue writing and improve as you go. Once you feel like you have improved a lot since the first time you began writing, then you can go back to the very first chapter of your work and analyze it. If you know you are lacking in skill, improve it or ask for help if you don't know what you will do. All in all, this novel has great potential. Remember, you improve as you write. You learn when you read.

I am really impressed! I enjoyed the first chapter down to the last drop. I also see that the author updates frequently. That's great dedication! I admire you, author HeavenlySleeper. Thank you and keep up the good job!