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she's a good hacker so why is she easily deceived? with her hidden identities and smartness portrayed why is she scheme against? it already shows contradiction to the FL characters. I mean, she already got two hidden identities while being in high school so why a small scheme pass through?

I'm sorry author, i don't give power stone if there is no new chapter release 😁

I'm sure Lili is the killer, also, why can't Yudong simply use her power to track the culprit with her spiritual power as a guide like before.

The flow of the story is good and it's concept is interesting, but the grammar is not that good. Maybe you can try to improve your English more, it's just my thought hope your not offended, and I know you're trying because everyone does right? 😊 Fate made me stumble upon your work and I like it because I love reading and your story is great, but sad to say, the gramatization will fail to hook more readers interest, I'm sure there's a lot out there who would like to read a good read. Sorry for the 'not so good comment/review' I just really like your story so I want to see more improvement for it, keep up your work I know you can do it 😘

Update please 🙏 I'm always voting for this story, I also like your other story. Always looking forward for more updates, keep up the good work 💪 stay strong.

It's a good story, please continue releasing chapters. It's always on my vote list 😘

I always vote for it and check for more released chapters everyday without missed, so please continue this story and don't drop it. I also like the MC here and the romance is slow in built up and that's a plus, I just hope it's not like any other story that the MC is always in entanglement to too many women.

I like the flow of the story, not like any transmigration story I read where everyone start as weak or have a system or magical tools to help them. And I like the character of Li, he's coo, specially whenever he uses his power. Please continue releasing new chapters and don't drop this story like everyone else. I will support you author. 🤩

mass released pretty please 🤗

I'm really looking forward when Muir is fully accepted as Qingqing's mate. And of course for Qingqing and Winston to be more intimate.