PlasticTango

PlasticTango

male LV 5
2018-04-25 Se unió United States
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PlasticTango
PlasticTango
22 days ago
Posted

There are a variety of things good about this, from its intense world building rife with political ideology to the deep focus on social and political posturing. I do however have to say that everything jn this story is written in passive voice. If you want everything to sound as if described by another person describing the story afterwards, then you'll be fine. Otherwise, it's excruciating. I've read 60~ chapters and that's how the author writes.

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
1 months ago
Commented

If ever there was an ant that would turn themselves into a psionic hive mind entity, it would be Solant. Purely so all the other ants would Stop Making Mistakes.

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
1 months ago
Posted

50 chapters in, and I can say this is A "tell, don't show" story where everything and everyone is described to be smart, or logical, or whatever but not ever really shown. And when the characters finally show their stuff, it's not very good. Sadly, while the author has some interesting ideas, they are buried under mediocre writing and poor logic.

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
1 months ago
Posted

Pretty much a crack fic. Leave logic at the door if you want to enjoy the story, and remember; the MC is a Good Guy. Except for all the times they aren't, but it's justifiable because morality is decided by the mc and everyone agrees. Also

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
2 months ago
Commented

Brilliant is so brilliant, and mad, that she has to remind herself of it on the regular to keep herself grounded.

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
2 months ago
Commented

Just came across this story, and will give it a couple more chapters. A interesting evil power fantasy is always fun. I just hope that the author decides on whether or not this mc is Actually 3 yrs old or an adult, because the logic in this chapter is just utterly shallow and wrong. Please be Smarter MC.

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
3 months ago
Commented

It's sort of crazy how vibrant is getting close to existing in a separate level of space time, her speed approaching a point where she litterally can't communicate due to the laws of relativity, and everyone's answer to this is "ok, back to work".

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
5 months ago
Commented

I'm curious how much of this is author research and how much is this author... experience

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
5 months ago
Commented

At last, for the first time in recorded history, protectant protected! Bravo!

PlasticTango
PlasticTango
5 months ago
Commented

Today we learn the power of recycling