Nice chapter Can't believe I'm rooting for a lannister but I hope the "kidnapping" was him finally get together with his lioness
good chapter
Amazing chapter Looking forward to the next one
Nice chapter, good to see him slowly developing his technique
Nah man, follow your blueprint. If they want a get strong quick cardboard then there's plenty of other stories like that. I for one find it interesting to follow character development so good luck
I'd say to go at the pace you initially planned. It's clear that you have a path of development for the character that you want to follow both personality and power wise. The story uptil now had been at a good enough pace since you clearly said that this was gonna be a slow read. It's also always better to show your character do the important stuff (very first mission is likely going to be important) rather than to just dictate it like a diary. After the mission of you still feel like your story is too slow pace then a small time skip wouldn't be amiss but don't forget that the event with gojo and the star vessel happens in this year so you don't wanna just skip past that.
"swords are for barbarians" "magic is superior" Sword Saint William waiting to get revenge soon
man's just suffering from PTSD
Who knows? Maybe he can use some strange high-pressurized gel cannon that could pierce through Boulders as if they were made of butter, or maybe he could suddenly grow dozens of limbs/tentacles using the incredibly vast amount of gel inside its body, or maybe he could use his magical powers to summon Cthulhu right here and right now in order to destroy all things inside this WORLD.
The Player? Surviving in Terraria as the only existence
Video Games · Jarron7
Absolute Chad
"We will find you… no matter what…" I promised, even if it took me my entire life. I would find her.
Twilight: We Are Venom!
Book&Literature · CORNBRINGER
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original Danmachi : Magus Rex
The world of Danmachi is filled with wonders. Gods and Monsters and Adventurers of all kinds. Meet Magnus a new addition to the dungeon town Orario. Where is he form and what changes will he bring to the Danmachi world. -------------------------------------------------- I don't own danmachi and it's characters, those are the property of Fujino Ōmori I only own my OC's with that I hope you enjoy my first attempt at a story12 Chs 772 Colecciones
Just Google search "game of thrones fanfiction the mountains range" It's the same copied over
The Modern Soul as Gregor Cleane (GOT) (ASOFAI)
Book&Literature · Game_of_thrones