hello author, this is a great novel. I love overpowered MC's. the only complain I have is that it's very "choppy", the story is great but it just doesn't seem to have a smooth flow. to put it in simpler terms it should be like knife through soft butter instead of hard butter, the knife will get the job done in both cases, but the former is smoother. 😅😅 I probably don't make any sense.
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hello author, this is a great novel. I love overpowered MC's. the only complain I have is that it's very "choppy", the story is great but it just doesn't seem to have a smooth flow. to put it in simpler terms it should be like knife through soft butter instead of hard butter, the knife will get the job done in both cases, but the former is smoother. 😅😅 I probably don't make any sense.
Stuck in a dungeon for 5000 years and acquiring unimaginable power
Fantasy · VasL