Can you not even put up a struggle?
Mythology Rebooted
Eastern · Mocking Phoenix
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"What's your forehead made of?!" Yuji exclaimed, pushing himself away with his feet and clutching his nose.
JJK: Red Priest Pathway
Anime & Comics · FroggitDude
I always thought the MC's interest in Maki was a little forced, until now I didn't really understand it, it could just be me, I don't know. I hope to understand in the next chapters. Other than that, the story is very good.
My author friend, I can say that I've been following the story for a long time, it's the most consistent naruto fanfic I've ever had the pleasure of reading, thank you for your time and dedication to this story, please continue, I'll be here.
I was thinking, why can't Fujin find a way to “ask” Hiruzen for the Razengan? it would be a perfect justification, and he would learn in a “cool” way.
The dialogues between Fujin and Hiruzen are the best thing about this story, I really liked it.😂
You could make cursed energy toxic to psychics in a way that makes sense.
That was a very solid chapter of development, congratulations. Looking forward to seeing what Peter does and how his powers and personality mature. 👍🏻
I get the feeling that the author spends all his time holding the MC and his rewards, in addition to spending some time looking for new ways to delay the progress of his war rune.
Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
Fantasy · HideousGrain