Sayl

Sayl

male LV 12
2018-04-04 Se unió Netherlands
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Sayl
Sayl
3 years ago
Replied to AnWan

Uuuhm I don't suppose your looking for a proper editor still? I read the first few chapters and it's almost impossible to get through, I'd offer my services. I'm not the fastest editor but I am a good one. Although I would require some payment, maybe like 5$ per 1500 words? I'm not sure about the price, but we can discuss that. But if you like the idea add me on discord. Sayl #3198

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Commented

Why's that surprising if it is his brother's duaghter I'm surprised she's older than 6.

Surprisingly it was the youngest girl in the group. She didn't look like she was older than 13 'I guess I did forget to ask Tyreek how old his niece was.'

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Sports · The_Gaji

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Replied to kundilicious

I got that reference.

Hash sneered "Hell yeah I'm angry. Dude called me a burnt ass chicken nugget. He was talking so much shit just because he beat me during the drill.

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Sports · The_Gaji

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Commented

Gotta disagree with your reasoning on this one chief, love the story by the by. But it's a bit farfetched, comparing someone who works himself to the bone getting out of playing time because of outside interference and a couple of lazy dudes who don't wanna put in the work. Personally I'd rework that bit.

And now he had done the same thing to Manny and the other 8th graders. They didn't have the skills to make it past any tryouts for a high school team.

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Sports · The_Gaji

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Commented

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Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Replied to Napknight

Sitting shotgun is the expression for when people sit next to the driver.

Jason and Kyle rode in Coach Swendel's environment and wallet friendly electric car. Kyle had to sit shotgun because it was more accommodating to his height than the back seats.

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Sports · The_Gaji

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Commented

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Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Replied to RedClover

With a name like Phoenix Phire if he doesn't I'll be kinda upset xD

He had assumed that Cyphix was small; however, that wasn't the case. The roads were made from a brown stone that gripped his shoes when he walked. The shops were made of red brick, and narrow alleyways separated most of them. As a former arsonist, he noted that Cyphix was unlikely to burn down to the ground.

Phoenix Phire

Phoenix Phire

Games · BotwaCazador

Sayl
Sayl
4 years ago
Commented

Pro-bono work probably wouldn't a word used in another world.

"Not enough coin for that either," said Charles. "Triple Threat are known for their generosity and pro-bono work, so I could get them for free, but when they found themselves stumped, I had no options left."

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Fantasy · John_Doever

  • My path to Mastery original

    My path to Mastery

    Fantasy

    An ex soldier is dropped into a forest unfamiliar. He meets people who speak a language he doesnt know, they wield weapons unfamiliar and fight forces unimaginable. This soldier chooses a path, a path few walk and none ever complete. He has chosen the path of mastery. Chapters are released daily! First 6 orso chapters are around 1500 words. they build up to an average of 2700 words in the later chapters. I continue to strive and increase chapter size. Could really use some reviews at the moment!

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  • Irregular original

    Irregular

    Fantasy

    Pain and suffering make a man strong or so they say, it makes us wonder. The people who have started this saying how much have they been through, did they have fingernails torn to shreds under their desperate attempts to escape? Did they attempt to rip out their own throats simply to escape their painful existence? Did the hunger and thirst gnaw a hole through their bodies until indescribable pain became the norm? We think these people do not know what they are talking about, throwing around words that sound pleasant. We are The Irregulars. We are born from pain, hatred our sustenance and suffering our armour. And we WILL have our vengeance.

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