honestly, i see drop in quality in your new story. the way u write it as if the reader already read your old story. story facing is too fast. too many lost tidbits, n most importanly your character less conviction. you make adam personality like an exited teenagers.
wild dio appeared
that right mate
I sighed as I looked at them. Knowing the possible future, I couldn't help but be angry, but seeing them now, I can't judge them for it. Not yet at least. Come think of it, this game actually had a more developed story and character interaction… well apart from all of the sex scenes. Mid-game, the villain would have killed Luna, and her final words would have actually been an apology. She regretted the night of passion with Ace and how she hurt the villain. With her final strength, she kissed the villain. This only sent him into further descent into madness, but it was tear tear-jerking scene. This was definitely a gray area I wanted to avoid. It was also possible that she lied just to mess with the villain's mental fortitude.
Fantasy · DrFantasy
now, where ws the pubic?
After a while, two spiritual roots that were shimmering with golden light appeared in Lu Yuan's suprapubic region.
Eastern · Flying Fatty
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gak ada akhlak
"Boohoo, I don't want to be a courtesan…"
Eastern · Bamboo City's Little Overlord
yeah, translator these day have no coinciense
"Boohoo, I don't want to be a courtesan…"
Eastern · Bamboo City's Little Overlord
lol, repeated offender found!
"How dare you rob the Heaven Breaking Pavilion under my jurisdiction?! I think I haven't killed anyone for a long time, so you have such an illusion? In that case, I'll punish you with ten thousand arrows piercing your heart every day and making you suffer a fate worse than death... Hmm? Why is it you again?"
Eastern · Dreaming Through Many Cold Autumns
he got the first archivement🤣
Below that, there was another line of text—The first person in history to take away a section of the Ancient Immortal's Path, specially engraved on the tablet.
Eastern · Dreaming Through Many Cold Autumns
each chapter is getting worse than other day. its make me want to beat someone. what datong? datong hui? translate it. that ur job.
This era name, popular since who knows when within the Datong Hui, marks the year the Datong Hui first ascended the historical stage in Comfort View Prefecture.
My Cultivation Companion Helps Me Achieve Immortality
Eastern · The Dumb melon Isn't Sweet