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Evil Jorah, all rapists can go die in a ditch. I hate evil protagonists. Shame, I was really enjoying it till the last couple chapters, where he started talking about genocide and now even raping and slavery.

I hate a cliffhanger, very curious how Harry's going to sway things in his favour.

Nice, lucky timing on my part. As soon as I finished the previous chapter, thisnone came out. It was a great surprise. I enjoyed the chapter, wonder what Karans next move will be.

Fantastic chapter, honestly, I can't wait for the next one.

thanks for the update. I love it so far. looking forward to the next chapter

I'm really liking where this story is taking us, excellent so far 👏

was wondering when the cloak would be mentioned, I wonder if Dumbledoor was going to hold onto it or give it to Neville? would definitely enjoy a POV from Dumbledoor after he learns of the curse

YOUTH!!

Definitely don't like how this played out. it's so dumb that Naruto risked the lives of jump city without making sure garra couldn't be released until he woke up.

I'm really curious what the shadow clones were worth, wonder what Naruto ended up with

I really like it. one thing though him being able to force a contract kinda defeats the concept of his power