This would read better if it simply stated they exchanged/observed each others cards, rather than spelling out the whole process of the exchange.
Steve gave the card to Charlene. Charlene took the monster card and took the card from Charlotte. She then gave the cards to Kim. Kim gave her Steve's, Charlotte's, and Charlene's cards. Charlene gave the cards back to Steve and Charlene.
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This would read better if it simply stated they exchanged/observed each others cards, rather than spelling out the whole process of the exchange.
Steve gave the card to Charlene. Charlene took the monster card and took the card from Charlotte. She then gave the cards to Kim. Kim gave her Steve's, Charlotte's, and Charlene's cards. Charlene gave the cards back to Steve and Charlene.
I'm Not a Monster Tamer!
Fantasy · Superglace