Malira2

Author said it will continue after stockpiling chapters for taste of Life in his own riview. We have to wait

I hope everything is fine with our author. We will have more dummy chapters than real ones, if it continues.

I really like the ending. It's touching, well written and builds a wonderful atmosphere. I didnt expect it to end at this point, but it didnt feel rushed. Good Story! I am hyped for your next work [img=update]

I like the Story so far. At one Point though i was suprised of their age in combination with their general mentality, but the explanation came shortly after it. If you have serious considerations that it could lead to problems with nfsw content if people dont unterstand their different growing times because of their species, then converting their ages would be the best option without changing to much. Personally, I do not care, I only care for more chapter [img=update] haha

This is good stuff

Good organized structure, well written and easy to read. It's only the introduction, but I need more [img=update]

Thanks for the chapter! I think your story goes well because it makes me intrigued and it's still only the beginning. The overall storyline is pretty solid for some action and it's fun to read how their relationships will develop. The scene of Sol and forest was really good in the chapter before. I hope you keep enjoy writing.

Take some time for yourself, wishing you and your family the best! I hope we can read more of your story when time arrives.