I will Check it out. Thanks for the recommendation
Well I’m trying to help the author not make him give up. His story is actually really good, just needs to polished. This is actually the first story I ever focus on like this. That’s how much potential I think it have. Instead of reading and not saying anything, I’m here giving criticism and he can improve. I think that’s more important.
[I wrote eye in singular because Odin has only one eye.]
Anime & Comics · luminous1_vanqu10
Lol it’s useless if you don’t write and can’t take criticism
Something like that . I love you story but fix it and I will read it again
Truck Kun, the greatest god
Didn't he remember being killed by a massive vehicle while trying to save someone? How was he still alive and well?
Eastern · MoBei is MoBei
They might not know what a Gu is
"It's not so much mastering the secret technique of brewing spiritual wine, more that by a fortunate coincidence, I obtained a bug called the Wine Bug. Using the power of this spiritual pest, ordinary wine can be transformed into spiritual wine."
Eastern · Thousand Lakes True Person
That is three realms lower
"You're a Soul Formation Realm Cultivator, but I'm only a Foundation Establishment Realm Cultivator two realms lower than you. Don't you know how to show mercy to women?!"
Eastern · Bamboo City's Little Overlord
This book comes out and then get drop and then repeat. It is kind of boring because the mc doesn’t seem smart and the story is pretty generic.
He can.
But as a stingy person, Momonga is reluctant to do so. Why should he waste his hard earned items? What benefits does he get?
Supreme One, Momonga! (Volume 1)
Fantasy · Soul_River