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Pokemon: Master of tactics
Anime & Comics · alex02373
It would be a better explanation to say its an animal zetsu
(Author's note: So basically, how Observation Haki works (Based on the one-piece Wiki) is that the user will sense his opponent's intent and predict his attack based on it. That is why Momonga couldn't sense Wilson coming at him because even though he looks like a human, he is still a gorilla.)
One Piece: The legend of Johnny Silverhand (dropped)
Anime & Comics · Wicked132
I have exams next week as well Good luck sir
Sorry to hear you are getting writers block. maybe you need more conflicts for tayaw. you already had realistic push back in the ealier phases but woth how powerful he is now maybe you cna go into supernatural conflicts. Antognists are good for making the character shine. maybe someone smart tring to ruin him or a creature that goes after his view points.
If youre really throwing love into the mix have you Considered a antagonist of sorts. ‘Maybe something like a critic. it would just flow better if tayaw is dating soemone if equal or relatively equal status
This is a very enjouable story. The author did a good job with world building, character development, and power progression. there is always a new arc with minimal sterotypes and the MC struggles all the time so its not a power fantasy. This is one of those Books you can feel yourself being absorbed into for hours on end.
Do you have any questions about Uni? I went to an american One if you want a q and a
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One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
Been waiting for the movie reveal Cant wait for it to show up on scene I will give you all my power stones and all my free passes siR
Overall I’ll say this is pretty good. There’s a healthy dose of world building beyond the series which adds depth and prevents the story from being stagnant. Writing is also solid but not like I’m a writer but as a reader of many fanfics, the 20 chapters flew by pretty fast. There is a bit of repetition that can be addressed. Rather than say he isn’t open to other characters because he doesn’t know they’re authentic you can phrase it in different contexts. It works but it gets stale if you say it 3+ times the same way. Maybe a bit of consistency in direction would help. Either he’s transmigrating abusing knowledge or he’s a 13 year old out of his depths.
Wednesday: The Strongest Psychic
TV · Nathe07