Nighstalker

um. not to poke at this. but last chaper is should be 2.9mil to everyone. this chapter 29 mill+ with give away should be 26mil+. the math has been very badly used. plus how they write it out he wouldn't have the 290mil they keep saying is exchanged. might want to clean up the math for both chapters.

so I get it. is this a thing now? all gender is fluid as the main whos male, is a she and her only when he's thinking. his senior sister is also a he and him in his thought too. also the write when describing anyone will call them correct as a him or her, but when talking the are switched??? did I miss something in this story and can someone explain how it is so badly gendered?

See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

seems he just stopped and gave the middle end part. phoned in the end again.

oh no. the legendary power they had the whole time comes out. why didn't they use it at start so the other teams equal couldn't one shoot them??? oh no they forgot they had them and use some commons right.......

is it me, or the 3 first family people and 2 2nd family that are on his team like half a second family no name? also how does second family weaker animals per you and equal animals not even equal if his friends have them? lastly how does that legend unicorn not seem to act like it at all but the first time shown. yes make the fight hard. but over kill easy when the teams are pretty much exact same class wise.....seems logic fell off table.

so somehow clans who they take days to reach at fastest speed in world. they all reach there townin seconds? they were unable to send out info on fact they have sedd to military??? oh and a armor that can stay out and is immune to all spells below forbidden is now limited and can't stop those spells?.....hello....issues...

so now heaven seeds are common??? 1 in a country to oh there 100 now..... leaders have high grade soul seeds too oh they all got heaven grade......wow