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This story will really give you a Shadow Slave vibes especially in the first few chapters🙄... Anyway the story is good and entertaining. I agree with the authors note about the MC being "dumber than a rock" but I don't agree with him being unlucky because the plot armor is slightly thick. As for romance, still acceptable, a bit cringe. The only thing I don't like about this story is, there are plots that readers might find boring or need to kill a few brain cells and just let the story pass. That's all...

A 5-star rating is pretty serious to me but you deserve it. I won't comment much on what to expect and quality of the novel since previous critiques already did that. All in all... this novel is worth reading.

I take back my previous review about this novel. Though the first volume is fine and acceptable, the second volume plummeted faster than an asteroid. It feels like everything is forced. The development may seem reasonable in regards with his past, but it became disconnected to the whole story and his decisions are bit idiotic and lacks the mentality of a mature person due to life and death exp which the author claims the mc has. This is another reason why the story became disconnected and forced.

I have finished the first volume so far, and it's quite nice and entertaining. I don't have to spend too much brain cells to understand the story. Anyway, I'm about to read the next volume and I hope that it would maintain or improve the story. The only thing I don't like is the fierce beauty he met during the first volume. It feels like a forced entry onto the story. Other than that, don't have much complain. It's a good story...

This novel is a bit acceptable as long as you could tolerate everything in it. I just wanna ask or suggest to the author to stop adding romance or writing romance. 'Cause it's terrible! I can tolerate the mtl-like translation and other mistakes but not the romance on this novel. It's unbearable and unreasonable!!!

I finished reading the free chapters... So time for the review. The story is not bad, good world background, story development, and characters. I won't delve much on praises as people already did. I will just state my complaints then. First of all, why are there lots of women? He meets lot girls and the story would focus on them. Is the author desperate for ladies? Or personally lack girls? Is this harem? Please tag it. It's fine to include women, maybe two or five, in a story but it would not be fine if the proportion is too disproportionate. Second is, I hate idiots and the MC is one. Though it's fine as I'm still at the building stage of the story. All in all this novel is interesting, entertaining, and one you would not drop easily unless problem persist.