Aioria619

a lot of filling friend, I hope you don't start adding too much filling like the rest

I think you don't understand anything about One Piece, pirates are 1 million times worse than the world government.

Most ninjas are stupid, blast tags are 10 times better than a fireball jutsu.

Friend, who is the protagonist in this series? getting more and more boring no one cares about madara or obito,+50 filler chapters

hahaha now you realize it friend? The Vikings were even worse than you imagine, that's why people who think that people lived better before always amuses me.

It is ,the author it is not a writer, it is a translator

the protagonist is super broken, it doesn't make sense to give him more powers,fujitore he easily defeats everyone in naruto, he could even destroy the "moon"

The amount of padding this fanfic has I have never seen in any other, when you introduced Karina you destroyed the series completely

too much padding i feel like nothing progresses