Dear Immortal Lady, This novel that you've written has piqued thy interest and I couldn't wait to shower you with compliments, "compliments~ compliments~ Take it all!" hehehe. After reading the first 3 chapters, this is my verdict: Writing Quality: Have you seen the clouds in the sky? The writing quality is heavenly~ Story Development: Like the growth of a fair maiden? Something worth admiring for~ Character Design: Like a descent of a meteor. Although it was fast, it'll leave an impression! Particularly the female lead and male lead. Well done! Updating Stability: She's an immortal~ she writes without sleep, or taking a bath? well I hope she updates like the night. World Background: It was so interesting! Particularly the rebirth part, I love the concept! And of course, her new world which is something to look forward to! Overall: The author is beautiful. Sincerely Yours, Immortal Beggar that fell in the stinky pond.
Well done! Everything are arranged nicely!
This is amusing! HAHAHA
Why does it sounds like you, your majesty? HAHAHA
"EXCUSE ME?!!" the lady quickly objected. This time, she tilted her head and glared at the darkness. "What bitterness of my past relationship? Such nonsense! Tsk! Tsk! Tsk!"
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Something big huh... 🤭🤭
"I would not mind if this darkness would devour me. This place is calming... is this the feeling of death? I'm sure that something big hit me before I came here."
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Literally died by a slap of a car door? HAHAHA
Lorraine suddenly felt the need to check what was happening. However, out of a sudden, a chunk of metal debris that looked like a car door suddenly flew right straight in her direction and hit her head!
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Jeep yarn? HAHAHAHA
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I had laid my eyes into something good again... As such, let this humble beggar leave behind a verdict once again. hehe Writing Quality: 9.9999/10, Top-notch. The words are weaved in a not so light yet not so heavy way. There are some grammatical errors but they were so minute that it doesn't affect the story development much. The sentence structure and paragraph blending are also nicely done. Stability of Updates: 10/10 Story Development: 10/10, the pacing is nice and refreshing. Not too heavy nor too light, just perfect blend. Particularly at the early part where the author describe the MC's appearance, her way of connecting the scenes to reach that point is admirable. Character Design: 10/10, perfectly suits the genre. The main lead and his love love is so cute. They were multidimensional. World Background: 10/10, Truly a supernatural novel. I love the concept of the enemies. Well done! To all BL lovers, the vivid scenes in the novel are worth looking forward for. "Ahehe~"
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The Ink Collector
War · SighingClouds
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original The Ink Collector
4.72
Jhin Herangel was once a prodigy merchant on Earth. Through his talent and luck, he became a billionaire at the young age. He was acknowledged as The Einstein of Business. His ability to command his employees was unparalleled; any task given was done with great efficiency and quality. However, it all changed after he was killed and died with eyes unable to close. When he thought it was the end, he accidentally signed a contract which brought him to a new world. A world where the horns of wars echo all year-round. A place where the myriads of races fought over resources just to survive. [Ding! You have successfully integrated with the Devil King's Legacy] [Ding! Please fill up the System Creation Form] He was given the ability to design his own system but in exchange… He must kill a million creatures within two years. Watch as Jhin Herangel, the one who fell from grace starts his journey in the bloody Chaos World and design a system to accomplish his goals. … [Ding! Discovered the tower of achievements. Do you wish to write your name and your greatest accomplishment?] “Sure!” [Ding! Please pick among your three greatest achievements.] 1. Vomiting in a God's head 2. Vomiting on the enemies' commander. 3. Flirting with the enemies' commander. “Forget it!” Jhin sighed as he reluctantly looked at the magnificent tower.149 Chs 1.1k Colecciones
WAHAHA, it's my first time reading a novel with this opening. So intriguing!
PEEEPEEEEEEEEEEEEEP! BAANG!
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