Lol nah you did a good job with explaining everything, don't get me wrong I love the book, it's got potential. It's not boring, it's just every chapter you tend overdo it a little haha
At this stage of the book, the constant over explanation of everything is going to diminish my brain cells faster than a nuclear bomb
Love the book. Love the concept. Looking forward to future updates. It's has the makings of a great novel. But it's just, umm very stingant, very uniform, too much going into explanation and description of certain events that's happening. It's a great story and I'm enjoying it but it's hurting my head reading everything being explained. Lol That's just my opinion. Look forward to future updates. Keep up the great work [img=update]
Love the concept of the book. It makes for a great novel. But it's too stingant, too robotic, very uniform. It lacks . . a certain flare to it.
Damn you author for that last cliff hangers
*sigh* more fillers. Getting sick of reading these fillers
Did the MC die or does it take 2000 years to come back from that portal?
*sigh* more filler chapters yay!
Love the book.
Probably would've been better if the chapters weren't repeated. Had a the makings of a great novel. Alas it isn't to be.
The WealthTap System: Rising from Rags to Riches
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