Drag->dig
"Are you done over there? I have dug that trench for you. You're not saying it's not effective, right?" Fenrir asked while glancing at Nathan.
Summoners War: Only I Summoned Divine Beasts
Fantasy · Fixten
Drag->dig
Is this like a litrpg genre type thing? Kind of new to the novel genre. I haven’t played games much in the last year, but every game I’ve played cooldown starts right after the skill has executed even for buffs.
Alexander was satisfied, he still had a 20 minute wait between uses but being able to use the skill for ten minutes made Alexander much more suited to a prolonged combat situation.
Zombie Survival System
Fantasy · Hamapo
Defending her-> defending him
"Do not call me Emi, we are not close," Emilia's eyes turned even colder as she slightly leaned her head back so that she could look down at Matthew even further, "And I am not defending her, I am only stating facts."
Breaking Dao
Fantasy · Romeru
Hope you don’t stop writing this one! It has me hooked!
Gunther shook his head -> George shook his head
Gunther shook his head, looking down at Gunther. "See, Gun, this is why you can't be a Conqueror—for as long as my blood runs through your veins. They're all suicidal … they-they wield the very thing that's destroying us and because of that, they do whatever they want. They're dictators!"
Conqueror’s Crusade
Fantasy · SkyStrider
Story concept is great. Grammar and spelling is off almost every chapter, but doesn’t impede reading. My only main gripe is that sometimes the transitions feel disjointed and like it’s skipping scenes/thoughts that could of helped with world building. Overall, I’m invested and looking forward to see how the story continues.
He was about walking -> He was about to walk
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
I regressed and became the Sword Ice King
Fantasy · Tofi_
Or heads. Think you meant “heads of the family”
Este párrafo ha sido eliminado.
I regressed and became the Sword Ice King
Fantasy · Tofi_
Eliminated as in killed under the light or did you mean illuminated under the light?
[Game Introduction: Those eliminated under the light of evolution will turn into monsters, while the survivors will become players. Players can gain experience or items by killing monsters, and a few may awaken special supernatural abilities...]
End of Days Game: I'm the Only One Who Can See the Hidden Cues
Fantasy · BWbear