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this fight is bullshit..u Made the MC already Admiral level..and yet he wasting so much time to fight diamente??come on man

so boring

quite boring

damn i love this fanfic

plis make an epic fight..this story bcoming boring just like this

no epic battle at all??

ITS just boring..already chapter 20+ but..boring..u fokus to much on story build..it makes feel like politic kingdom build..don't forget this is fanfic..many already know about the original plot..

to many unnececary chapter..u wasted them..

to much thinking and nonsense..already this far yet still make the story like prologue of some kind politic novel

boring..97% original story..tq but need to drop..hope u get a lot of stone