You need to get a beta reader to fix a bunch of mistyped names and errors in your story. That said, the quality of the story itself is alright if you exclude those obvious errors and the pace is nice too.
I think when you say Ekans you mean Seviper. Ekans is the kanto snake, seviper is the one found in hoenn, and it's also the one known to have that rivalry with zangoose you mention.
we need moreeeeeee Come back with more updates please!
Thank god I hope this one keeps getting updated, got sad when the other one stopped updating...
One of the best pokemon fanfics out there so far. I put it on the same level as Journey Towards Greatness before that one turned into a 50% badly written smut fic... Hope the author keeps up the updates and the quality!
are these chapters going to get fixed sometime?
using squared units for a measurement of space does not really make sense... cubic is the unit used for volume, which is also the way we usually measure space...
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[DISCONTINUED] HP: A Bolt from the Blue
Book&Literature · Ashtar29
No problem dear author. So long as you are not actually dropping the story and keep uploading on a semi-regular basis (i can even accept once a month if it gets to that point) then it's all good to me. Great story so far so just try to keep it up and not rush into things.
I will only say that if you are paying them for this they're not deserving the money. Your own writing was much better and I think I speak for all us readers when we say the quality has been dropping. I will still keep reading it for the plot but am now honestly looking forward to volume 3 more than the rest of these chapters xd
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Naruto: The Template System
Anime & Comics · Navy_King
stolen work is stolen and no credits were given. for the original look for 'harry potter and the daft morons' on fanfiction net
Harry Potter: The Witty Wizard
Movies · Miguelho