kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007

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Anime lover and the reader of all the books. Newbie author

2017-08-23 Se unió United States
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kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
17 hours ago
Posted

I like the concept behind the character but I wish the author took more time to humanize the AI prompts. The flow is okay but sometimes it suddenly jumps from one thought to another. The dialog is where you can really feel the lack of a human touch. The interaction between different characters feels of like it doesn’t really belong to the story even though the words themselves fit.

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
2 days ago
Replied to chimera_owl

It’s possible. I’m still thinking about how to handle this hot potato

Unfortunately, trying to evolve my new Beldum is going to be a huge pain. I would need to either catch three more, or find some way to induce its evolution without fusing with another Beldum.

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
2 days ago
Replied to chimera_owl

Not long actually. I had multiple wheels with different chances for each item. The gag gifts were a 40% chance

[You have received a jar of dirt. The best friend of pirates!]

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
2 days ago
Replied to chimera_owl

It would. Natural effects like that are taken into consideration when I write my fights

"Niflheim" Skadi glances back at me and when she sees me nod she starts to glow in an icy blue color that slowly intensifies. Niflheim was a risky move as it sets up the field to do lots of damage over time but it was draining for a newly trained pokemon to pull off. The light on her body seems to pulse from her tail to her mouth and every pulse makes the glow in her mouth grow until she lets out a massive burst of ice type energy that I am able to feel even through the psychic shields. The temperature in the entire stadium plummets as the entire arena is covered in a layer of ice and a hailstorm starts from my side of the arena growing in size until everything is ice. The ground, the sky, the very air they are breathing in the arena was filled with ice type energy. Through the snow and hail, I can clearly see Skadi panting heavily but her eyes are focused on Lycanroc.

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
3 days ago
Replied to Sorasun

This is actually canon. The Pokemon world is fully of kinky people

"According to researchers and historians, nearly every human has the blood of a pokemon in them. I guess our ancestors were a little bit on the kinky side," Flannery answers.

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
7 days ago
Commented

*Russia Unless Europe in MHA is much larger and Russia is much smaller

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Tony smirked, lifting the mask of his suit to reveal it was empty inside. "All Might, I'm literally in Europe, in a penthouse, getting fed grapes by my girlfriend. I'm as far away from All For One as possible."

I Am Ironman (MHA)

I Am Ironman (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
8 days ago
Replied to Xrhbd

Depends on the battle. The rules are stated at the start of the match

Zephyr appears and seems surprised by how the field changed but she expertly flies in the ongoing storm. On the other side of the snowscape, Sudowoodo appears again, the gash across its front telling that it is on its last legs. I order Zephyr to build speed in the storm as Sudowoodo starts tossing rocks at her, trying to knock her down. Once Zephyr has built up enough speed, I give her the order that should win the match for us.

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
8 days ago
Replied to Xrhbd

It is fully random. I have a wheel of stuff to select from.

[You have received a jar of dirt. The best friend of pirates!]

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Pokemon: An Icy Path

Anime & Comics · kurotsuki007

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
9 days ago
Commented

Half the chapter is the last chap

kurotsuki007
kurotsuki007
9 days ago
Commented

either "with my boyfriend" or "with your boyfriend"

Melissa just continued to blush, "What's wrong with wanting to experiment a bit with boyfriend?" She said as she slowly walked up and wrapped her arms over his neck.

I Am Ironman (MHA)

I Am Ironman (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

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    Pokemon: An Icy Path

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    You know what’s great? Turning eighteen. You know what’s not so great? Opening your eyes to a room you don’t know, followed by the world's most intense headache. This is how my story started. Where it goes from here is anyone's guess. --- This is a Pokemon fanfic about a girl that gets brought into the Pokemon world from Earth. --- This is my first time writing a fanfic so take it easy. Helpful criticism is appreciated and I may ask for suggestions but in the end I am writing this because I want to. I'm not sure what tags and genre will encompass this story but I will update it as it evolves. --- Cover image generated by AI. I plan to commission artwork if I can reach 100 chapters.

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