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iiCreation
4 years ago
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*I've read this translated story and its raws chapters (up to chapter 200ish) * Good Parts: Overall the story is quite good, the characters are quite fleshed out and there is good world building. The plot is logical and good as the MC doesn't just go provoke people other nothing/chasing females and the power system make sense. In addition the system is just a cold panel thingy and the MC decides what to do with the system and doesn't become a slave to the system like many other novels. Spoilers Below ------------------------------------------------------------ Bad Parts: However there are also many bad parts, for example while the power system is semi fleshed out well there are many times that its kinda vague. In addition while the author usually follows logic there are parts that just makes you question how and why. For example after dying the MC gains a new function in his system that allows him to revive and obtain benefits by temporarily weakening. For example by losing a certain % of say "mana" but in exchange said "mana" quality is improved. The MC then proceeds to go insane with this function literally suiciding many times and I'm here like seriously? not once does the author mention for example the pain of the deaths and its effects on the MC? The MC literally disintegrates into dust/explodes into chunks of flesh multiple times and its literally brushed off like its a flesh wound.

iiCreation
iiCreation
4 years ago
Replied to LightningCatThief

Ive personally only skimmed through the book tbh, but im just saying while there may be nationalism it obviously doesn't correlate to irl nations seeing as all nations in this novel are fictional and the author clearly did so to avoid that whole issue. Second I agree with you that this story is slow, its insane how slow it is, literally like 30 chapters in and I still don't know what the author is trying to introduce, not to mention random theories that no one really cares about or know. However Im assuming you also skimmed through the chapters as a reply to your earlier questions the author has introduced the background of the character quite well, it is introduced that he is a test tube baby, aka why he doesn't have a mother, it is introduced who his father is and what the father does and how that correlates to the MC. The author also tells the readers what the MC does such as what is his job/skillset/education level.

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