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Our MC was a veteran that died out of old age. He was about to enter paradise when someone stopped him at the gates of heaven and told him that he still had a different destiny to fulfill.
Nothing belongs to me except the OCs that appear in the story. Also it will be quite inconsistent updates since I am writing on other projects.
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moreeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
too much out of whack on power trip. the idea is decent making potential changes to the future plots, but it becomes out of whack on power scaling and forced justification. " I'll kill kushina so minato can commit genocide" is just a no no (this doesn't happen but a good enough example)