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this book is discontinued due to critical mistakes. I gave to much to the MC such as a perfectly balanced team, everything he need, money, and none of the conveniences. that in and of itself is already a mistake. this is not mentioning that I kept forgetting the Pokemon I gave to the MC and needed a list to keep track of that. then again I had no 'opponents' planned, not a complete plotline. therefore I am currently rewriting this at Leisure and also with a lot more detail.
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Escribe una reseñasince the author fails to warn you in the synopsis, I will. the mc enters an open relationship with his best friend(male) and decide to share a girlfriend because she is rich and pretty? there is also no build up to this, no hints, no dialog between the Mc and his friend where they come to the conclusion they will share a girlfriend. it's just dropped on you in 1 or 2 paragraphs. thats the major negative and why I would recommend not reading this novel. the positives: great world building, interesting character, no real noticeable Grammer errors, and stable updates.
I'll be honest.The book started off pretty well. Few odd things. For a reborn man he becomes best friends with a male kid which I find super strange. But the worst of it was where he wants to share his girls with the same kid/best friend and have an open relationship with multiple girlfriends and boyfriends. Respect the choice but not my cup of tea.
One of the best Pokémon stories on this websites comparable to Pokémon Wanderlust A new world A world that is more realistic than that of the anime that you win cuz of fiendish I just hope Author San will continiue :)
Cool i guess cuz it's one of the pokemon i am probably going to read again Cool i guess cuz it's one of the pokemon i am probably going to read again
Very good story, with many good characters and great world building, very unique. was so glad to find a pokemon romance stort that's still updating with no harem tag. it was all messed up when mc and his friend decided to share a rich girl while beeing allowed to date different girls. while not my cup of tea some might enjoy that. I am to scared of reading more ss their relationship develop (Male/Male/female threesome) or worse she gets more boyfriends (heavy NTR or even worse he starts to enjoy different dudes with his girl(s))
Well I'm just writing a review cuz I noticed its already been a long time and still no results for rating so here we are, This fic is not really bad at all tho I'm quite sure many are surprised at the turn in relationships , the Pokemon world depicted here is surprisingly realistic and well depicted so it's kinda like a breath of fresh air(this is months ago and poke fics with realistic setting popped up here and there) any way I can assure you it's not disappointing but I can't really judge if it's your cup of tea or not but I like this one nonetheless 😉😉👍👍
love this fanfic so far cant wait to read more of this story overall it's pretty great..........................................................................
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Ch 23 the MC is going to be in an open relationship with his girlfriend and his best friend where anyone can get more boyfriends or girlfriends, you should put a for openrelationship