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There are three worlds in the universe, The mortal world, the Underground world, and the Demon world.
Devon, born and raised in the mortal world. In a world where power determined the world's dynamics, Devon who was born from a top-class family failed to live up to the expectations of his family and this brought about his exile from the family.
Shortly after he was banished from the family, Devon was contracted by the most deadliest race in the world, The Devil race.
And so, Devon's journey began...... Join Devon as he uncovers the secret of the worlds, the truth about his mother's death, and how he becomes the omniarch of the world with his harem of beauties.
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So this is an original book, and I'm giving it my all and I hope you give it a chance.
The first twenty chapters (more or less) were not quite good tbh it might seem boring and confusing, but that is only because they were the first I ever wrote
Try reading 40 chapters before deciding to drop it or not. You'll understand how much potential the book has.
It really gets better eventually
Thanks....... Our journey to creating one of the most overpowered character begins.
PS:- I don't own the image on my cover. If the original owner sees this message, you can contact me.
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I gotta say I'm obsessed with this story🤣 Well the writing of the author...of my god, it's awesome like the world background, the characters, and the writing quality...the word perfect isn't enough to descript it. Well, the first chapter is so interesting with the flow of the story and the mc's family background. Should read this one!! 10/10
The author creates a world that's both exciting and intense. The characters are ruthless and the writer's way of portraying fights and battle scenes makes this all the more interesting. I've only read up the C3 but this is definitely a must-read for anyone looking for an action-packed, story-driven, and well-thought-out novel. I can't wait to read more Author-sama! Keep up the good work!
There is a lot to say about this novel. Think the author don't have a lot of experience writing novel. So, I'm going to make it my job to comment as much as I can on the mistakes he makes. The story: The story development is kind of too fast. 50 chapters in, and he seems like he's unbeatable. Also, what kind of bs is this when the mc asked for the mysterious orbs from the auction boss and the boss agreed just because the mc won the stare-down. Isn't the mc suppose to be grateful that he is saved by the boss? Character design: The characters are fine, no problems with it. Just not that great enough to get a five star. World Background: ...Seriously, author? So far, I have not seen any explanation about the levels and the power catalogs and stuff like that. There should be like, Level 1-10, regular human stats to Olympic champions stats. Level 20-30, surpass human limits. So on, so forth. After reading a lot of chapters, I didn't get any in depth information about the worlds and people's abilities. Not trying to roast the author or criticize on no bases, just trying to give some constructive criticism to the author.
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just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did. but 😑 the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge type story. many readers readed the revenge type story thats the fan fiction is so popular this day. creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload. right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. but you just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline is Also. the mc of this story almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....
just a free advice if you like take it or just leave it . please don't these reader's advice affect your story . don't include unnecessary things like romance and all those stuff . especially harem these things are like fire if don't written well it will destroy your entire story but If you have confidence and a well directed plot then to i advice to be cautious. please don't these reader's affect the way you think they are here to read your story not to direct your story and most important do listen effective things and critic but not trash . and in the last thankyou for your efforts 😊
Well I applause the author, that he was brave enough to write and publish his webnovel, not many can do it. The world is interesting, the cultivation system is a bit cliche, but it's not bad to have a cliche as how you use depends. Now to say what I didn't like that much. That is that he got a Katana, and the Celtic long sword, first if there isn't a Celtic culture in this world, why it is named as such, and katana, they are a bit cringe, but that is only something I dislike not something that bad, and it comes to reader tastes. But the Celtic sword can be a pothole as this world is different from ours. The system is too convenient, he really gives almost all to the mc, he was lazy to get some stones and buy for points, which can be useful. He got a conic hat, but those are suspicious and I doubt someone will not search for who bought one. And well as advice I can give, is that you shouldn't make your mc undefeatable, as humans, or even gods no one can be perfect. Well have a nice day. :3
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good plot but lot of confusing parts. would help if author explained some things such as power leve and how to cultivate and stuff better. but overall good story just explain things better
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my second review, I didn't like it at the start but the author got better as the book moved forward so I think it's ok......................
Wow, this is marvellous, the author really did great work writing this, it is to be considered a masterpiece and there are very little faults from the very beginning. Keep up the good work Author 👏👏😁😁✨✨✨🔥🔥🌟🌟🌟⭐🌠🌠⚡⚡
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The book has a nice start to it, it is easy to understand since the writer gives an explanation of everything. The characters and plot are well done. I recommend it to anyone who like a good novel from weak to strong.
the writing quality is extremely shotty at times that's the biggest flaw and by far the most consistent which takes away from readability...
This doesn't have any consistency and can can be very confusing to the reader such as how or when did the MC get that weapon/item or power etc.
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I have not read a word of this novel. But i am not interested since Its logically evident that he cant be stronger than the devil that he borrows powers from. After all you can't be stronger than someone who is giving you power logically. But the Chaos thing was interesting.
By far one of the best stories I've read on this app while the story is a little rough at first by the time you get to chapters 50-60 it gets addictive Devon is an amazing main character and the background of the world is filled with mystery that makes the story stand out and the development is also very good and the updates are very consistent and sometimes the author is even nice enough to throw in some extras. I'm very excited to see what is in store in the future for Devon's adventure and all the mysteries to finally come to light. The only negative thing I can say about this story is the grammar mistakes that are made but that will get better with time. I heavily recommend this story to everyone and hope to see it to its end