World of Supernatural: I'm Raizel(Twilight,VD,Originals,Underworld..)

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DaoistwoOVFA

I see the comments of the first chapter and I agree with his/her comments about Tokyo ghoul and I have to agree its odd that Tokyo ghoul is apart of the story it doesn't really fit in the theme of mythical story I feel odd about it juts as he/her say just a suggestion take aut the Tokyo ghoul part and replace it with teen wolf so the theme is the same just a suggestion it's up to you ❤️❤️❤️

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Adarsh_Raj_0410

The story is good but include backgrounds talks of non mc character about mc , and instead of including originals ,you could include whole Vampire diaries series thus making it more interesting

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Leonardo_Henrique_0539

Is everything okay with you, AmouxCreationsX? I wanted to know if you're going to continue the story. I'm looking for a Twilight story, but all the ones I find either aren't the theme I like, or they're the theme I like but only have 5 chapters and haven't been updated anymore. Could you please respond

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Mob_Character12

Very funny. I find the thought of someone as powerful as Raziel just randomly trolling people because he can and because he's bored to be very amusing. This fic had me laughing like an idiot when his reason for an action turned out to be, "just because." Everyone's having nervous breakdowns wonder what his reason for showing up is, and he's secretly just like: "lol I was bored. sup fam?"

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Carson_Hogan_1836

Is there a love interest? And if so who is it?

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DetachedDreamer

I don't see the hype of the story. just a boring dude, who's OP, parading around and looking down on folk. there's obviously a superiority complex he has that's influencing his personality. Somehow made boring fictional characters in twilight even more boring and annoying. I was excited. hoped for an original MC, hoped for fun interactions and dialogue. maybe it'll develop more but im bored outta my mind reading about the Cullens cowering around him. if something entertaining happens I'll revise my review but til then this is average at best.

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DaoistnRqEOk

Please continue, it's very good. I want to see the reaction of the originals when he goes to see them because let's be honest the originals are very arrogant.. PLEASE CONTINUE

:)............................................. :) Noice Good stuff Interesting............... ......... .............................. .... ... ... ... .. ..... .....

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DaoistisZXMX

I like your work this ff is a great read

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DaoisteNFkQR

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