Capítulo 16: Poll & Final considerations
Here is a summary of more than 100 comments I read, reviews, and rereadings about this story: "I don't like/hate it. It's bad, but I endured and it's already in the end so I want to see the sequel"
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Side note: some people really liked it. I love you guys <3.
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Final Decision
I won't create an entire slice-of-life version and cut the mystery.
I won't just write the sequel knowing the first volume was this bad and the new readers still can't understand.
I will create a remake that includes this trial with slight differences within 3 short volumes.
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Why to read the remake?
Additional POVs: you will know more about Morticia, Grandmama, Gomez, Thing, Lurch, and even Kitty.
Misunderstanding: the misunderstanding element was added to this story (more like a sub-element to enrich the relationship between the two).
Consistent Tone / Smoother transitions: at least more than here.
More Wednesday X Tuesday: It's hard as hell to write, but I'm improving in it.
An author more satisfied? I had a lot of fun writing it and structuring the plot for the new Mazurka. The chance of dropping is lower than here. And I learned more too, so there is a lower chance of committing odd mistakes.
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Justification (If you agree, just skip).
Some people can call me crazy. 90% of the readers said they wanted the sequel as it is. So I'll just punctuate the reasons that make me go against 90% of the votes (adrenaline killing me lmao).
Creative block: every chapter gives me several creative blocks not because is hard to write, but because is hard to see my inbox red. I see every day a pattern of "I love it" -> "What's going on?" -> "What the fuck is going on?".
Lack of tone: I never wrote anything dark. I just knew how to write gradual cute things. I just understood how to write dark content because of this trial. I want to create a consistent tone for this story.
This was a private story: this wasn't supposed to be a common reader read. I had written it just to myself without much planning. The trial was an idea I thought was "fun" without considering who would read it. I would never write a planned public story with this mindset.
Insatisfaction: I didn't have a clear image of the characters when I wrote it for the first time. Wednesday and Tuesday gained a personality with the flow. After writing and structuring the remake I noticed this could be much better than actually is and give more emotional depth to them.
Those are all the rational reasons I could think of. But being honest what led me to do it is an emotional aspect: I want the readers to have as much fun as I had writing it when was a private story.
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Doubts and Solutions (If you don't have, skip.)
"I don't want to read the same beginning." -> There is additional content in the beginning.
"I want the sequel of it" -> Skip volumes 1 and 2 of the remake and read volumes 3 and after it.
"Won't you get tired of rewriting it?" -> This volume was rewritten more than 3 times, the author is mentally a masochist. Curious fact, the time I spent in one chapter of it was equal to 3 chapters of the remake XD. Is not even a lie, I wrote it yesterday!
"I don't want to wait so long just to see the sequel of it, you're so slow." -> Six chapters will be uploaded today. The volumes will be shorter just to prepare the Mazurka (unless the readers want more slice of life). I'll try to update more often too, just a promise yet.
"This volume was torture, and I don't want to read a remake with it" -> I'll be the most creative as possible using all I learned here to make it better, but if is still bad skip volume 3. You'll lose character growth but will have more of your slice of life (You can drop too, don't force reading). I'm using more strategies like an occasional "know-everything" narrator to explain things out of the character's scope.
"I want at least the next chapter." -> Are you sure? This will be very rushed. A reader said: "Don't rush things, is always a bad idea."
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Final considerations
I hope you read it, but it's okay if not. I hope this time I can create something that is both interesting for me and to the readers. I received so kind comments and this gave me confidence. If you like it I'll give you something even better in the remake.
As always, I hope you like it.
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