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A thousand years ago, the world witnessed an unprecedented conflict that pitted humanity against the immortal undead, vampires. The war was cataclysmic, leaving both sides teetering on the brink of annihilation.
Just when all hope seemed lost, a celestial being, self-proclaimed as an angel named Raziel, appeared to champion the human cause. His divine intervention forced the vampires into retreat, vanishing into the shadows, but not before they made a pact among themselves.
Twelve powerful vampire lords convened, vowing to retreat and lay low for a millennium, using the time to recuperate their strength and raise a formidable army. Each lord claimed dominion over a different region, weaving a complex web of secrecy and manipulation that spanned the centuries.
To protect humanity from the lurking darkness, a select group of elite vampire hunters, known as the Headsman, arose. Gifted with a drop of the angel's celestial blood, the lucky few among them transcended mere mortals, gaining superhuman abilities. Their duty was to seek out the remaining vampires and rid the world of their malevolence.
As time passed, the horrors of the vampire war faded into myth and legend. The once terrifying creatures of the night became the stuff of bedtime stories, and the angel's intervention morphed into a distant fable. The Headsman's tales were now shared around campfires, woven with exaggeration and disbelief.
The thousand years is nearly up.
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The opening starts off very interesting and engaging, but my biggest problem is the way it’ executed. The paragraphs are very lengthy and not broken up so sometimes it feels a bit much. I feel is you tone down on the descriptions and balance it out with character thought process, would help me have a better understanding of the character. Right now the writing feels distant , like I’m a bird watching but don’ get much of internal monologue or room to form my own thoughts and opinion because of the over detailing.
It's been a while since I have enjoyed a novel, The starting three chapters are well written.I know that it's not perfect, The author had focussed more on the details and less on the character's thoughts and dialogues.The structure could also be improved a lot and paragraph could be shortened.However, despite that I will give author A for effort. I like the writing style which is rather poetic, the story also sounds promising.