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Untold journey

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Autor: Loyalscum

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Creeping steadily From the darkness of the universe is the shadow that will bring hardships unimagined along with endless beauty. A journey across the stars to worlds unknown to mankind. Danger is given when traversng the unknown yet, its also what helps set you free.

[This book is only paused not dropped I will continue it when my second book Unusual world is in a good place]

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zd4zaas

Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.

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The only problems I see is that the author needs an editor. The story is great and the plot characters are unusual yet they develop exactly how you think they would given their situation. The author writes from the truthful realities of human nature and character which is good. I love it and I am looking forward to more of his work.

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Loyalscum

Hello guys Arthur here just like 2 say this is my first storry ever i know there is only one chapter but, please dont judg me to hard i own no computer this is done on phone or something else. This is only the beginnin andstorry will get darker to the point MC is the most hated mosg wanted man in existence the things he will do will make hittle look like a sissy. So continue reading and enjoy.

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