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Capítulo 4: Chapter 4. Elizabeth

A few hours have passed, the sky was already beginning to darken and my parents had no signs of they gave me life. In all this afternoon I was able to write only three chapters of my story, but I was not going to upload them all, I had to continue fixing some details and ended up uploading one of them, it was one of the longest I had done since I started, it was over 1800 words long and was the the only one of these three that I had liked as I had written it the first time, without having to make exaggerated changes before uploading it. The story had almost reached a thousand visits and that excited me a lot, I did not think they were going to like it so much and that I was just going for it chapter 12, the story will be long. Although some days I could not think of anything to write and thought about stopping, but at the seeing that hundreds of people were liking what I was doing, encouraged me more to continue with her. Suddenly I heard a strange noise, coming from the patio that led to the door of street, making me jump in my place and I stared at the door leading to the front entrance, to see if it was my parents who had already arrived, however, this It opened and the noise was gone, now the noise coming from the sky was the one that invaded the whole place. No I gave it a lot of importance, because it could not have been anything. Without further ado, I entered again my story and the things I wanted to change, but this time another noise invaded the place coming from my room, it sounded like something had broken, like it was something made of glass, as if one of the windows had been broken.

At that precise moment a chill ran through my entire being, I could not move because of the fear that dwelt in me, but I had to do something, I could not stand there waiting for a murderer serially I left my room to strip myself of this life. I was walking slowly through from the corridor that led to my room, on the way I found a baseball bat, I took it with my two hands, I was holding it tightly, as if someone will try to take it away, I felt heavy breathing, it was the only noise I could hear, so I tried to calm my nerves and I began to breathe more slowly, trying not to think about what awaited me on the other side. I walked close to the wall, in case something happened and more so that they would not see me arrive if I was a thief, but I didn't want to think about it, otherwise it would make me more nervous than I found. I walked slowly until I reached the door of the room, which was open and with very little light left from daylight, I first brought my head closer to to be able to see if there was someone there, but I couldn't see anything, I took courage and decided to enter it. Between slammed into the room, raising the bat in his hands so that he could strike if is that it was necessary, when I entered, a shadow settled in front of me, I could not see his face because of how dark the room was already, because if it were someone who knew would enter through the door and not through the window as to take such a blow that to give without realizing it, my instincts acted for me this time. After having launched such I hit his head, I stood back and turned on the light of the place, it was a boy with a jacket icing, with the drawing of a skull on the back, and without hesitation, I knew it was Andrés, since he was the only one in our city with that Spanish jacket. I didn't know how to react when he turned around and shot me a murderous look, with those eyes of his that told you this was the end for you, as he clutched his head with both hands and writhed in pain at steps from my bed, at least I wasn't a thief (it was the only thing my mind could think of) To think about it further, I helped him stand up, and I apologized as he did so. "Elii, what's the matter with you, woman!" He exclaimed, furious at the blow. "I'm really sorry, I didn't know it was your Andy," a little laugh escaped me. I made him sit on the bed and went to get him some ice because he will need it.

"Here, put it where the blow was," I said, passing him the bag of ice that I took from the kitchen, no it was a very large bag. He just looked at me and grabbed the bag to do what I had told him to do. "What was it you broke when you came in?" I asked suddenly, as the window was in perfect condition. "It was a glass of wine that was on the edge of the window," he said still something annoyed. Glass of wine? As far as I can remember, I didn't bring any of that to my room, but apparently I did. have done. We were both silent, no one dared to mention anything, it was for sure why It had happened yesterday and I was waiting for me to start talking, so I did. "Andy about yesterday…" I said, being interrupted by his voice. "And about yesterday…" He fell silent when he heard that I too began to speak. We let out a little laugh at the realization. "I'm sorry, you first," he said, starting to play with his fingers, something very typical of him when he makes you nervous or desperate for something. "No, you first," I insisted "Okay," she gave a little laugh. "The thing is, I don't remember what Pass ... - his voice was interrupted once more, but this time by the sound of my cell phone. It was a notification from Maipad! (the application where I wrote my book) a new user had voted in five chapters of my story and that moved me too much, that my lips were they parted forming a big smile. Maipad! It was an application where anyone who had an account on it could read the stories made by other users who were encouraged to express all their ideas and feelings, although you could also write something yourself and make the brave decision to upload it to the platform or save it in the drafts area.


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