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A boy gets reincarnated into a cultivation world and lives his life peacefully after becoming the strongest. Just when life was good, a huge humanoid black fog thing attacks the world and he had to sacrifice himself to defeat it.
Only when he was getting ready to go to either hell or heaven, a system merges with his soul, informing him that the creature didn't die and come again, to attack the world and his loved ones.
So, he goes to another world, with a system, to stop that creature from harming his loved ones. All he has is a system which gives him rewards when he opens treasure chests.
I changed both the cover and the title as I thought the previous ones weren't that good. The new ones are also not great though.
Points to remember while reading:
1.The cover has Nie Li from TDG on it. That means my MC looks exactly like the Nie Li from TDG.
2.I did write harem, but I will make sure it doesn't become similar to the pokemon game and be more like the pokemon show, where Ash bonds with the pokemon and makes the pokemon join willingly.
3.This is going to be a multiverse fan-fic and he is going to many other worlds.
4.A close person of the MC will die. Most probably, there will be no more deaths, well at least till the story in my head. Many readers didn't like it, so I am giving a heads up to the new ones.
4.I am not writing a story for an English textbook. There will be errors and grammatical mistakes. Please bear with me and if considerate, you can correct them and I will make changes.
5.I am writing this, only to feel better and deviate my. mind from studies so, don't expect steady updates.
6.And lastly, I don't own anything except the MC. So, if I use something which the owner is not comfortable with, let me. know. somehow and I will remove it.
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Escribe una reseñaFor the newcomers who come to read, just keep in mind that there will be the death of one of the main character's girls to make the main character take his environment seriously. * You have been warned not to go around complaining.
English isn't my 1st language so if author finds anything offensive then just ignore it. That was good idea behind this fanfic. But some things were too much to ignore - 1.The way mc monologues in his brain. 2.Some conversations reminded me of those arrogant young master who mc fights in cultivation novels except here mc was acting like them.(Don't say mc is from cultivation world because he lived quite long life, so if he acts like that either his mentality is like those author who make these stories( not yours but mentioned above) or he is brain dead.) Just ignore it if you don't like my review, but i like (a little) the idea behind this story and wanted it to be improved.
Fue medio interesante el contexto de la historia pero conforme avanza se vuelve más y más aburrido no encuentro emoción y se siente como si el autor escribiera por escribir sin pensar en una trama en fin mi valoración es: bueno para una lectura casual si no tienes nada mejor que leer
Well, I think its one of the "Not good, not bad" fanfiction.. Now I wouldn't ruin someone life by saying negative stuff today, so I'm gonna follow my mum advice. My momma used to told me that "Your momma so fat that she's the reason why people make a" your momma so fat" joke"... So, merry Christmas. *Awkward intensifies*
Revelar spoilerGood so far......................................................................................................................... . . n n
so from what I can see he is already to Op but meh not like I am not used it by now and the story development is gone hay wire I dont if it mha anymore sometimes cause the fanfic just dont give me that vibes but oh well decent fanfic btw I cant say anything much about the english cause I suck at english myself 👀
Autor Akainu_TheBea5t
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