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The MC has experience in dangerous trips in his past life, since his life always liked adventures, taking risks on each trip. This was done to test his luck. Now that he had reincarnated in the world of Naruto, he aims to surpass everyone and venture into new places. He will travel to other worlds….
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I don't know English, I hope you understand, If you don't understand some parts, don't read. If you can, you can help me correct it. Thanks.
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The MC will only be in the Shinobi World for a short time, then he will go to another world…. This story is going to have romance, and action in every place you go. The personality of the MC, you can see in chapter 2.
I do this story for a hobby, it's like a test. If you don't like it, don't read it, and please don't insult. If you like it, I await your criticism and advice to improve the story.
Most importantly, this story will have a survey, the route we can all choose by the majority. Remember, if the MC wins something, he is going to lose something too. At the end of the saga, you will see what was lost.
Each chapter will have a small summary if you do not like to read a lot.
Please read the chapter “Read This First!” As you will find every detail important.
Without another word, I hope you like the story.
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it's an OK novel but,the grammar ain't all that great, ,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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In itself the story is ok, the English is pretty bad so some parts, powers, abilities are hard to understand without and explanation. The story itself is very Character driven. like more focused on personal interaction and growing. The style is more in line with your standard Drama than an Action fic, that's not a bad thing but much of what would make it a very good story is just lost in translation. Emotions and reasons don't come across that well in the translation and that makes much of what happens in the first arc very boring and makes little sense. The idea is Good, but overall I'm not a fan of the story development as a whole, is just not my style and feels a bit forced when I think about all this being a whish of the MC to be reincarnated into this world.
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Bro just one rquest put Harem tag 🏷 On it , as those who do not prefer harem will just skip , but the story is good harem or not you got me hooked up with the storY
Uuhh, can you do something about the Grammar? I like the story, it's just the Grammar that making me want to Dropped it... Uuhh... [img=exp]
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somewhat good idea but the grammar is not good ! ...... ................................................. .........................
Rin in harem ,Rin in harem Kay . Well other novel there was mc use space and time to go to past just to take rin into harem . Men who can't make that women into harem are beta mc to me ,cause he want harem? but cannot make them accept harem? that's was beta mc Alpha mc are simple , he say to girl he want harem if they not agree he left them hahahahah . There many women it's like fish in sea so no need to catch one women
This project is interesting to me. Minuses of the project : 1)The strength of the main character is not exactly shown .2)The plot is too different and little developed 3)Few characters, and the existing ones are little revealed
you promise to end naruto verse in 60 chapter and now I see it's going more than that 🌚 I m not mad I m kind ( thinking where author home to kipnap while type comments) see I m kind just you know I feel long time I didn't kill people , it's feel warm when I do that heheheheh
The story is fantastic and I would recommend it to anyone seeing if they should read it by looking at reviews, The only issue with the story in it's entirety is that sometime the he becomes she's and she's say he's but if you can get past that minor detail you have an amazing read.
This is pretty good but because I need to have a certain amount of characters appear to be able to post this review I'm gonna just spam m mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
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I found it good and interesting /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\
Soild 5 $tãr! The way you write shows that your experienced and know how to add a great amount of depth in a story. I like how the development plays. Completely original. A short and simple review.
UghI can't wait to see you about it when I get home I will be there at the same time I don't have a car so I can get a ride to the store and get some rest and feel better soon and that is why I am asking
bro the only thing, i want to say is this story is trash, if you still read it, you'll be disappointed, mc narrates to himself and he give too much reasons to justify his action, it will just get irritating
This story is more like the bizzare adventures of Max instead of an actual fanfiction. This story has a lot traveling (time and space) so it feels all over the place.
The story is great, as it is not following the original plot, it has a lot of suspense. I recommend it, and the only flaw would be in its grammar, but it is understandable, it corrects it when the error is found. The characters are well detailed, and the character is very good. If you have time read the story.