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The story is going great so far, I love when the same scene is shown from different perspectives and adds depth to the characters as well as the story. Another thing I liked about it is developing all characters. However I do think that there are some dull moments such as the future which just felt like a 5 chapter info dump rather than a story as well not explaining the characters more. Author expect us to remember all character names and even guess from just a line. Sometimes I don't even know which character we are talking about. However despite all that, the story itself and the background is quite well written and enjoyable, the academy wasn't stretched out to increase word count, which I really liked.
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I don't know why but I'm getting a sense of Deja Vu while reading it 🤔🤔🤔*have i already read it in some alternate reality.
the author seems confused, he keeps on introducing new hero and heroine, forgetting that he has already introduced many characters.
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MC got thrown in novel as fat villain who will soon be killed by his own fiance due to him being fat, he got through that helped many people, amazing thing is every character in this story have their background story, kind of good, I guess
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Very interesting concept and the writing quality is great, just one big problem. Too much info all at once or not even explaining info. A lot of the time it seems like something is mentioned that has an obvious implication to it and although I too am a fan of foreshadowing it doesn't feel like foreshadowing if it is even an attempt at that. Like there's a line "Each of the heroes have their own unique story, that's what made the novel so popular." Great! Each of the heroes of the original novel the MC read had a bunch of different protagonists with their own story, but I had no idea before this, and this feels like pretty important information that should have more than one just casual passing. I also feel like there's always a bunch of info dumping, it feels like there's so much idea and creativity flowing through this story but it all just bursts out in big bubbles one at a time. It makes the information your giving me hard to understand and it makes me unmotivated to read or pay attention to it. That said the story is interesting and cool, and I think if the info was more spread or well introduced (like we're suddenly thrown into a few chapters of an entirely different scene with no mention of MC and I though the author posted chapters to the wrong story) it would be much better. 7/10- Definitely worth a shot, and don't let this review dishearten anybody from reading this as it is definitely interesting just flawed in some areas.
I saw it went on hiatus because you have exams. just come back strong with more content like this, I really like the story and the plot.
Well, for a novice author the story is quite good, but the characters do not have a consistent character, the story goes too quickly, although the pace is not great. The main character cares too much about his appearance, why? Was he a model in a past life or something? There are still some moments that confuse me, but the story is quite suitable to pass the time, because the plot itself is quite interesting)
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I'm very confused at chapter 13 but I guess I'll keep going. I don't hate it, I just don't get how I'm supposed to feel about the characters.
would've rated higher, but quality of the story quickly dropped down mid vol 1 and 2. what happened Author. you were doing really good at the beginning.Writing quality 3/5 at first it was 4 almost 5 but it wasnt, sometimes the preference of his writing style is cringe.story development is 3/5 because I got confused both with the story and the MC himself. is he autistic?character design and update stability are both 5, because it was atleast creative and stable in updatesworld background is 4/5 its okay atleast, still dont'tunderstand some things but great potential, dont waste it.I rated it while keeping in mind this work is Authors first.
The book starts off a little rough but once you make it past that, it is trully great.
I got to chapter 49, and I'm really confused on what's happening but It's still entertaining to read even when you get lost. So I actually recommend reading this.
AUTHOR NOTE :Hope all of you like my original work,It has nothing to do with any pre-existing novels,name used in it is randomly choosen by your favourite AUTHOR-kun...