/ Anime & Comics / To LOVE-Ru: System, debauchery and troubles
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Finding himself after his death in the body of Yuki Rito, the guy not only acquired a cute little sister who now needs to be taken care of, but also received the Perfect Human System.
And, apparently, even this is not enough for the universe. A divine artifact called the Notebook of Love appeared on the horizon, provided by the enchanting Goddess Freya...
The goal is simple: accumulate Attachment Points with the help of girls and develop at the expense of them!
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Pretty good their only a couple issues with formating, going back and forth with the characters first and last name witch can be kind of confusing
Well I'll be the first to do a review because To Love-RU fanfics are very rare to see here, it has a standard reincarnation beginning, a system to improve and a goddess who observes it, it only has 4 chapters. At the moment there isn't much to say but it looks decent, the MC doesn't have the mentality of a Japanese so that's a plus. The only thing I can really criticize is that the grammar needs some work and I saw a few errors in the names.