Capítulo 1: Meeting with an Angel
It was Saturday night and as usual I was home alone with no plans or intentions of going out . Even though I was 24 and single I couldn't muster up the energy needed. Lately I was even wondering what was the point of the day to day, I hated my job my girlfriend cheated on me with my friend and there wasn't even any good shows to watch or light novels to read . As Tyler was stewing in his own depression little did he know events would take place that would give him the opportunity of a life time. While I browsed the new novels section hoping to find something to take my mind of the monotony , I heard a loud explosion and screaming .
I look out my window to see that my neighbors house is on fire. I quickly threw my sneakers on and sprint outside to see an older woman who I vaguely recognize. She is crying " my babies please someone help me my children are inside but some walls collapsed and blocked the hallway to their rooms " Tyler immediately sprinted inside. He soon came face to face with the flames and quickly inhaled the smoke causing him to cough violently. " shit what the fuck am I doing I should of realized the air quality would be poor" he though as he pulled off his shirt and covered his mouth and nose while he worked his way through the home . As he rounded a counter he saw the collapsed wall blocking the door way , but he wasn't worried . See becuase as long as Tyler can remember he was always freakishly strong even with barely ever working out he was stronger than most Aleut men by the age of 12 , and that abnormal strength only grew with his age . Tyler wedged himself in between the wreckage and another wall and pushed with all his might. Using his full strength for the first time in his life . The material immediately started showing signs of movement gradually creating a widening gap inch by inch .
While Tyler worked he heard another enter the burning home it was a volunteer firefighter. "Hey what the hell are you thinking kid get out of here and let me handle it "
"Now isn't the time to argue quick just go get the children while I hold this up " Tyler responded. The older man looked at Tyler one last time before begrudgingly accepting thinking ' I lack the strength of the kid no young man I just need to be quick and we can all get out of here ' as he rushed past , Tyler saw the man who was well past his prime blow through the door with his shoulder ' very impressive old man ' he thought soon the man reappeared holding 2 small children . Tyler realized the gap would need to be wider as the children were unconscious so he grit his teary and pushed harder. As the fire fighter squeezed pass with the children , both men were greated by a loud snap followed by Tyler screaming. The wall fragment that Tyler was somehow holding up snapped and crushed his legs .
"That fucking hurts " I screamed as the old man looked at me telling me he'll be back as soon as he gets the children out . I look down knowing my legs are probably broken as I watch fire slowly crawl closer to me . I don't know what's worth the ever increasing heat that is slowly starting to burn my arms and face or the crushing feeling from below my knees . As I'm debating I see the old guy show up again I can feel he's talking to me as I see his mouth moving but I can't hear him . 'Am I going into shock , wait yea I think I am I don't deal any more pain idk if this is bad or great becuase this feeling I'm having right now is almost euphoric '
Dan looked at the young man in front of him yelling " kid come on where's that Herculean strength I need to to help me lift this so I can drag you out . Hey kid come on snap out off it and focus . Come on just push with me your too young and after what I saw here you don't deserve this your a hero god dammit now quit being a pussy and push ' no matter how Mach Dan yelled or tried lifting the price himself it wouldn't budge . Dan slowly lost track of time till he felt a 2 pairs of arms grab him and pull him back out of the home against his will. ' what the fuck are you doing that kid is still in there he needs help if it wasn't for him those children would of suffocated we can't just fucking leave him. ' But no matter how loud he got all he heard was silence , and the roar of the flames as he watched it slowly envelop the young man who he thought was a hero .
I woke up in a strange void . I no longer had a body that I could see or feel , yet I could walk around? 'Am I a ghost, holy shit I'm a ghost. I'm definitely haunting the shit out of my cheating as bitch of an ex and that asshole if a "freind". '
" Your not a ghost and though I agree that those 2 do deserve some form of punishment don't think that again or I may not be able to help you as much "
Looking up I notice I'm not alone " holy shit are you an angel " I say taking in the form of a beautiful woman with silky blond hair, a more that large bust and the most perfect set of lips I've ever seen with a golden halo and wings. Oh how I would love to give her a kiss and hopefully more " and what do you mean don't think that and helping me can you read my thought and will they dictate weather I go to heaven "
" yes and no child here in the room of judgment while in your spirit form your thoughts are shown to all . This is to ensure an accurate reading of one's soul so that we can properly judge one's true character and ensure the proper placement. Wheather that be heaven or hell or even something else . "
" Alright if you can read my thoughts I'm sorry for showing such a poor side of myself as well as for objectifying you and your beauty. I truly meant no offense you are just quite literally the most beautiful woman or a Angel I guess that I've ever seen . my name is Tyler and I hope that you can help me "
"Hahah child it's ok I appreciated your thought on my beauty I can tell from looking at your would that it's one of the most pure souls that has appeared here in many years. And by looking at it I can tell you are a very honest and kind child and have a consciousness that almost always leads you to do the right thing . The only flaw I can see is a little black speck caused by the 2 you mentioned previously. They both must have truly hurt you for such damage to occurs to your soul. Now though let the judgment commence ."
I don't know how long it took it felt like years . It was like watching my life unfold almost as a movie but it's like I was watching from someone else's veiwpoint . When it was all said and done I looked into the eyes of the angel in front of me and asked " so how was it do u get to go to heaven."
Seraphina looked at the child in front of her and processed everything she had just witnessed. She was sad for the one in front of her and extremely angry at the 2 that had hurt him . ' this boy, all he ever wanted in life was to be a father and have a loving family. He passed up on having sex many times all becuase he wanted his first time to be with someone he truly loved. How do I break it to him that his dream can never come true even in heaven .'
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