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A special operative finds himself in a precarious situation during a military mission on earth and reincarnates in a fantasy world.
Regrets from his past life make him swear to use his training and knowledge to change the world.
It won't be easy to make a difference in this cruel unforgiving world where magic, monsters and adventurers run the show. Thankfully he'll have some unique abilities to even the odds, a few tricks up his sleeve and some friends to help.
Update: Also here's a map that focuses on the immediate region where this is taking place. https://imgur.com/a/SonNtBy
*4/26/2019 Update: I tried to keep writing but I can't. My mind's not in the right place, sorry. I'll put this on hold and get back to it eventually, when life is more stable.
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The story seems ok although a bit of editing and character development is needed. The abilities are interesting with the setting; however, there does need to be a bit more realism in parts particularly of the maturity and slip-ups of the protagonist. The fluctuation between intelligence and maturity to a sudden childlike actions needs to be explained or changed to give the story a full five stars. Continue working and refining the novel.
This is a good start to a game lit novel. Keep working on filling out the characters. The more they feel real the more the readers will get snagged into the story.
Overall a great story I’d recommend it to anyone who likes isekai’s ,sword and magic. Though it’s still in the early phase it’s hard to come up with any dislikes or concerns. So far they’re possibly love interest , many opportunities for future plots to develop in ways of conflict.
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i don't read but i will give you 5 stars, maybe i return when this novel have 100 or more chap, so then i will make my review.......................................caracteres
30 year old soldier reincarnated with 40+ int and yet acting like a child! get's bullied by 10 year old, get beaten up, gun's stolen yet do nothing about it.. in short MC is stupid!
Hey, author here. Thanks for the support so far guys, first time writing a book and it means a lot to me. I know I have some things I can improve on, update wise I can't match Qidian due to work and family stuff but for other things feel free to let me know, I welcome all criticism. I draw inspiration from a lot of sources, notably western fantasy and some eastern light novels. So expect it to be sort of a cross between them. I opted to forego the usual system AI present in these type of stories to allow the reader to feel in the same level at the MC. Future plot wise I am not planning to have a stereotypical harem type deal going on, I find it too corny. There will however be some romance, I'll try and get my wife to help with that haha.
This story is quite new, but it is also quite promising with good character development. The pace is felt just right, neither too fast or too slow. Even at chapter 12, there are still enough plot hinting for future big fishes.
Really can't say alot yet as it has only been 12 chapters as of now. However, I am really enjoying the story so far and hope the author continues with it. The story has done a good job making me anticipate the next chapter with it's interesting mc, as well as the awesome creation power the mc has. Keep it up author and I will keep giving my power stones!
Really good I read everything in one setting, hope you keep righting this story. 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 1140 140 140 140
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Please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon and don’t stop writing this book it really excellent I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!
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This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it soon and don’t stop writing this book it’s really good
This chapter keeps getting better and better I can’t wait tell you write the next chapter so I can read it soon and please keep writing this book so I’ll be able to read it soon
Novel muito boa. Embora o MC fosse usar um pouco mais o cérebro, perceberia que ele já poderia ter dominado o mundo, kkk. A história é interessante, autor poderia usar mais a parte de criação dos objetos.
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30 year old soldier reincarnated with 40+ int and yet acting like a child! get's bullied by 10 year old, get beaten up, gun's stolen yet do nothing about it.. in short MC is stupid!
I would like to like this novel as it has smooth writing and consept that I often like (modern world mc ended up in magic world) but there are just too many plotholes and plain stupidity for a 30 year old mc. 1 chapter mc is on guard in hostle situation but end up in pieces without clue due to a bomb behind his back that basickally has nothing. All the hostle stuff is in front and also is he deaf? Next waik up as 6 year old skip 2 year and then he is bullied first time by bullies that seemed to do it all the time before to him that made the 6 year old dead so he could took the body over. 2 years with no bullies - for real? So 8 year old finds his magic has over the top stats while yungest known magician is 12 year. But hei after people acept it they toss him with 15 and 16 year olds without any introduction, suport or even follow up iterest. Even when he gets beat up unconsious no one cares? He is known pridigee and no one takes interest? The bad guy who beats him up is 15 or 16 old enough I think but just goes and beats up 8 year old without any real reason... Mc has artifact making skill and he starts making guns and for some reason makes several of them and leaves them just lying in his room. Is thats how profesional soldier would do. As he knows there is no such things as guns anywere else in the world. Of course it will be stolen. And now I have to decide if I want to read on as all of this bugges me out and its only chapter 14. If the author would just invest a bit more to story development - writing itself is fine.
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