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He barely let out a scream when he witnessed the destruction of his home, nor did he retaliate, because he knew he wasn't strong enough. But, that has changed now. The world shall tremble beneath his feet.
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Haven't read it yet.. but based on the comments so far looks like a good read. I'll put this in the reading list for now and start binge reading when it's chapter 30 or so...lol So I'll just put 5 stars for now
First of all, I viewed your story in a reader's POV and not as a professional or something so you may find some fault in my review. There's something that I need to point out and here it goes: Just like what you said here in your review and author's note, the prologue was really too much to handle. It doesn't (you know) pull a reader to read the next chapters. Prologue is an introduction, you did a good job in it as a whole, I like how you ended it but you should tone down on your choices of word (I think it is the main reason that it's hard for a reader like me to continue, there's a lot of words that I don't understand hahaha) Aside from that, on your chapter 4 (the filler chapter) there's a phrase that has been bugging me for a while so I will point it out "You cannot afford to be heard, even when you are injured - especially when you injured. Bla bla" The part where you said especially when you injured, I feel that there's something lacking on it or it's entirely wrong but anyhow I hope you can fix it because it makes the reader confused. Other than that, I like how you narrate your story (You did a great job on it!) , especially when you're describing the things or the background, it makes the story realistic because the reader can also imagine the places, the person and etc. Overall, keep up the good work fellow author! I'll try to finish your story, I'm still in Chapter 6 and all I could say is the storyline is great so far. P.S please do keep in mind that I'm not familiar with this genre, so if you find fault on the things that I said, you can just disregard it.
A very well thought story. It has a very good potential. The way you portray the story to the reader is excellent. Good job on this one fellow author.
Damn, I did not expect the novel to be this good. There's a good amount of comedy, mystery, and action. A very balanced combination. Well done!!!
The Author has a very interesting way of telling a story. A very entertaining way. It's rather quirky and fun to read whilst being unique. The world that has been created is very interesting!!! There is also a lot of mystery. I can't wait to find out more about this world and what is happened to Malazan and what he's up to.
Well, i Write this for fun anyway so first of all, Thank you to the Author for writing this wonderful book. Without you, mallaza would never be born, one thing i hope or should i say.... a request? Please stabilize the chapters release at least one chapter per day for 5 days in a week, the more the better. Darn, i lost some inspiration now, i hope you as healthy as always and everyday in your life are going to be an awesome day for you. Keep writting, because once you pick the pen you shoulder many expectations, anticipation, and dreams of all your readers. You are a gifted man, in this aspect, the talented is always get obstructed by many challenges and i hope you remember of what i said earlier, never give up. It's okay to take a rest sometimes, but please, never abandon your another life as an author. Inspiration, everybody have it. But to change them into words and inspire another people, that's rare if you take into accounts Millions of people. Even if it's just a Line of poem can change people lives. So, all the best, may Allah bless you and your family😊. (P.S: Sorry for my bad English😅)
Only 2 chapters HV been published so far, and here's my review after reading those The writing style is good, I like the way the author describes the scenarios and environment it's vivid and nice , As for the protagonist and story not much hv happened so can't really say much, but the story seems promising so waiting for the update😊
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*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I saw "Don't read this story. It's not worth your time." as the synopsis, I would only use something along similar lines if you dropped the novel, and then you should include the word dropped somewhere in the synopsis. Also, if you did drop the novel, I'd suggest publishing a new chapter saying such then deleting all the other chapters due to how short the story is as is. Two months is too long for a web novel unless on hiatus, and then such should be made clear.;,;. The plot felt slow, I am not really sure what to say about that though.;,;. Positive Feedback: Your world building is progressing at a good rate in comparison to your plot, and I really like the character development. Personal Feedback: I thought the story was too slow. I can see that there is a decent plot coming together, but I still can't begin to see the next milestone due to the lack of speed, thus I will not be continuing this story.
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