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The Origin (MultiVerse Fanfic)
4.69 (45 valoraciones)
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1st time writing so be prepared for Bad Grammar. Wish-fulfillment with large number of girls. If it's not your thing don't read~
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I don't own anything except for my Mc and characters I might add. I also don't own the cover photo. Please inform me if you want it removed(to the owner of the Pic.)
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MC wakes up at a room he doesn't recognize. When he tries to check where he was he heard a voice inside his head.
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World/empire building
Massive Harem
Easy going mc
OP mc
R-18
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World traveling
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man, I like the fic but you could slow down a little in familiar situations, skip less time and add more dialogues, and to not get long just mention less important moments
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Quite regular the truth, the writing is a bit loose. MC acts as a babysitter. Good luck.
keep the good work author!!!!!!. I liked the story so far!!!! 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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ok this is my review. Writing Quality 5/5: although there are still mistakes but for me it is enough to understand. Story Development 5/5: I love the story development in every world that MC visits. although there are still a few that are odd but still good (for me). Character Design 4/5: I have commented where Mc touched his woman in public but I was wrong. I read back from the beginning and I just realized it was not the groping part. But the kissing where the Mc kissing the dragon girls in front his Guardian Flore for no other reason than the pleasure of kissing ( in the top chapter there is a scenes where Mc kisses in front of his friend but in this scenes Mc has a reason ). other than that the basics of Mc character are good. Updating Stability 5/5 : Everyday Update of course it 5. World Background 5/5 : For now there is no problem, I like the author's thoughts for WB. Ok that it. Thank for you work author. I enjoy your work. I hope you are still passionate about making this work better 😆👍. Sorry if there is a wrong word that i wrote.
Isang chapter palang Meron na agad Malibog yata yung author na to hahaha and the story is very good I hope the author Notice this notice me senpai (Gubbersh)hsjdhdhfbfbfbjfjfjfjfjfjdjzndbdjdndndnncjcjcjfjfbrbdndnfjciic
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I think you should temporarily remove the genre and for parental controls for the Power Stone to appear again[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend] Keep the spirit I like it[img=recommend]
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My fanfic so I am going to give myself a five! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing fanfic. I like the MC attitude and personality. I also enjoy the interactions with the characters! Also the author of this fanfic is very funny (the author notes between paragraphs make me lmao🤣🤣) Enjoying the worlds so far cant wait to see which world the author chooses next!