The Night Angel

So before I write what the stories about let me lay down a few things 1. English is my first language but not my greatest skill I will have some short comings. 2. I do have to go to school most of the week but I can post at least once a day. 3. Critique me I wanna learn how to write better one of the reasons I'm doing this. 4. The is gonna be a bit generic you read system novels and so on and cultivation novels were the MC had the ultimate luck so expect that a bit but I'm gonna try to make a story that I enjoy. So know for the the synopsis:
Jeremy had spent his whole life in the hospital he never went to school or parties. Due to him having a rare medical condition were when he moves he starts to bleed profusely internally so he has to lay still. His only companion was the nurse who brought him books and read to him he loved many series and always loved the one were people we reincarnated. We start are story right we're he dies.