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Hayato is a luckless 15-year-old boy, that bad luck caused him various accidents until one day it took his life, but God gave him a second chance to live in another world with a system that has all the powers of his favorites animes and mangas.
But the other world's God wasn't very happy about him being there, so he interfered and now he has to survive against that God's attempts to kill him and the enemies he will meet in that new world, all with his System locked
The cover is not mine and English is not my first language, you have been warned
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Having a mix with an anime and manga system for Hayato along with an original world you came up with your story is great for the setting. Hayato has to rise above his challenges and enemies as he goes through his adventure. Whether they’re from nobility, criminal, deities, and other anime or manga characters.
It's good. I like it and I would recommend it to everyone to read. It need more chapters though. So author, please don't drop this. 1401401041041041041040
The story is good and you should continue on. But give him even more exciting powers like divine divide, etc and all which will at least give me goosebumps
I just point in solid caseing love the story it for me has hit a close to heart fantasy nerve and rattled my emotions to read when available.
really nice to read, waiting for next chapters update. Don't drop it, but don't hurrytake your time to write it!! Sometimes need to be careful, you repeat some of your text
Is it finally back? After a year of waiting. The story is great with a few grammatical errors, which an interesting story that differs from common fanfics.
Despite my good rating I do have somethings that I sorta dislike and that is that the MC isn't really getting abilities from other anime worlds like for example he could get the boosted gear and the commandments from Nanatsu no taizai. The other thing is that the MC doesn't really seem to I guess increase in power because he says he's training but he doesn't elaborate on that which I don't like.
El ingles se me da mal para escribir pero thanks for the chapter and the novel I hope you continue the story because it leaves a lot of intrigue
The hero's backstory is quite bad and unwell, leaving many holes in the plot. Though his new attitude and vision on life is commendable. The story's progress is quite nice and well a little fast paced. The writing aint bad and i commend the way the theme is used
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I can’t believe how entertaining this story is. I honestly believe this story has the potential to become very popular “especially if author gets a proofreader”. If you like stories with systems than you will definitely enjoy this one because of the little twist. Looking forward to what will happen next. To all potential readers give it a chance you won’t be disappointed.
Not bad. I like this. Although some grammar mistakes here and there, it's not too much. As for updates, the rate has fallen recently. Other than that, I don't find any problem with this novel.
I like your story and i give you 5 star dont deop this and dont think about something trash like rank just write your novel for ppl ho like your story
All good except writing skill i think. U just need keep writing and update new chapters as fast as u can😁 The plot and concept is classic jap novel? Well old but gold. Its harem? At least make all his woman pure. We dont like our future already used by someone isnt?? And mc already op in there so dont hold back when he do something then do it fast!!
Its a great fanfic and i hope you dont drop this Also, you can try find an editor or consult to one because it kindof weird with the wording And you can try to write from 3rd person(author) point of view(POV) instead of just from the 1st(MC) POV
5 stars to not drop and keep posting //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Well, I'm not going to give myself 5 stars because I'm medium slow writing, also English is not my native language, so I apologize for any writing error