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royalroad novel - summoner
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/52007/infinity-core-summoner
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"Artic"
"When the chessboard closes, the king and the pawn are will be placed in the same bag."
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Artic was a young student. He often struggled with his thoughts in his mind and tried to survive in the modern world. He was smart and liked to read, but he also liked to think about different things in his mind.
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Artic was killed trying to help a woman who was attacked. When he opened his eyes, he was in a different land with a voice in his head. Where he was reborn in the same body, people could have divine powers or possess special powers by developing their knowledge and philosophical perspectives on issues.
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We see what Artic choose for his special powers and what kind of person he will be in a new fantastical world.
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I like the idea of the story I also like the main character but holy feck does it get difficult to read my man needs an editor. It’s gotten to the point where I’m not sure if I should be choosing to drop such a good idea or struggle having to read the broken English and **** grammar. Mr author please get an editor skilled in your native language and in English so you can turn this amazing idea into a readable book
An interesting book. here goes my random thoughts : "To think There is only one age to be happy, just one time in each person's life when it is possible to dream, make plans, and have enough energy to fulfill them despite all the difficulties and obstacles. One age to be enchanted with life to live passionately and enjoy everything with all the intensity, without fear or guilt of feeling pleasure. The golden phase in which we can create and recreate life in our own image and likeness, clothe ourselves in all colors, taste all flavors and indulge in all loves without prejudice or shame. Time of enthusiasm and courage when all willingness to try something again and again as often as needed. This fleeting age in our lives is called the present and lasts for the instant that passes."
I have to drop this story. I tried, but the writing is among the worst I have ever seen. You don't read what you write, because first an ability is called X and in the next paragraph is called Y. Many of the characters are genderless, because you use he and she for the same person. If you rewrite this story with the help of an editor I think it can be a good story.
The story has a good concept. With people studying Laws and becoming stronger, this whole idea has a huge scope for development. But author has competely messed it up. His character goes from some Justice League type Hero to a guy who will kill anyone within 10-20 chapters. He happily demands money using intimidation. And honestly, I have no problem with it. But so fast? What about inner conflict? What about character development? His personality transition? Nope, nada. One moment he is talking about loving a girl because she is interesting, few chapters later he kill her without any remorse because she insulted him. What? Like honestly? Next is the character. Robotic. Idiotic. He just goes on and on, no plans, no dreams and no personality. Heck, we don't even know how does he looks. What does he likes. His secret dream. Why does he want to get stronger. Nothing. Above all, their is no planning in what he chooses. If you are given knowledge of all the things in your previous world, why not go with Quantum Forces, Energy, etc. Quite tough? What about gravity? Physics? Nuclear physics? But what he chooses? Cloud, fog, rain... Anyway, it's authors personal choice but I wouod have liked to see some preplanning. Some thought in choosing your futures. The cultivation system. It's weird. It's broken in a bad way.I can't describe it in any other way. Law difficulty and power makes no sense. Like Low God of Crow? What the hell did he study to achieve mastery of 'Crow'. And what makes a crow more complex than microorganisms which MC has chosen. And how did he merge ten laws to turn into a Crow law? Author is probably just bull****ting here. Similarly, what's long way? Law of Long way? Wtf? And believe me, it just gets weirder. And like a cherry on a top...a rotten cherry. Editing. It's hard to understand anything they say. I have read better sentences while MTLing. Their are so many problems that I don't even know where to start. Some are quite minor, but the major ones make understanding anything impossible. Author is also trying to make the world vast with a complex developed order structure and power structure. But all the laws just sound stupid and seem like an invitation for a full scale rebellion. I have many more issues but that's it for now. Author please get an editor. That itself will add a full three stars to the rating. We can ignore the rest, but poor editing just kills.of the mood to read anything.
............................................................................................................... The story is very difficult to read because of the inconsistent writing
I have read 70 chapters and i do think tyis story has potential it was just written by sime one who sucks at the most basic parts of writing. If the author bothered to go back and correct his many obvious mistakes and stoped deleting peoples post because they leave a bad review then this could be on par with some great novels like world of worlocks. Some things he does wrong is: 1. The way he writes makes me think English is is not his first language. Which is not the problem the problem is he writes so 1 dimensionaly , MC is an ideot that flip flops me then a fish out of water. Dies because of wrandom woman .Promises to live for himself no others. Transports to another world . Gains powers at a stupidly fast wrate .Bumps into wrandom whore gives out precious knouledge about fire for free. Now ***** is never mentioned again. 2. There is no structure he pretends to be careful but, he is as arigent as they come. Does not do basic reserch about brand new world. Ok about killing human for no reson after 1 command from the principal at a school. Should have 0 fighting experience but Does not matter cuz he 1 shot everyone. No one has escape ability despite the people he is fighting are hundreds of years old. 3. Super easy to become a god he does not need to train meditate , explore , get good equipment. Demi god stronger then mid god him. His chess philosophy is super lame i liked his old powers better. 4. Gods who have lived hundreds and thousand of years are stupid like pre-pubeant ****. When he is on adventure because he is at mid god leven and arthur is only now how there is no one else in story to give an F about he ads more 1 dimensional mid god beings who tell u ****ty background ove campfire. Insted of being mysterious and all incompassing instead of acting like a lvl 10 adventure group. There are many problems this is just the tip of them i just hope Arthur fixs them so story can actually be good.
It has an interesting premise but shallow characters, hurried scenes and a really subpar writing. Had to drop it for now, might pick it up again in the future if it gets edited and maybe a bit revised.
A very interesting concept and overall fun/unique idea but the story feels a bit rushed to the point that what should have been a 30 chapter arc is finished in 2 chapters leaving the reader having trouble feeling attached to any passing characters or place the mc is surrounded by at the time. Unfortunately the writing is very inconsistent and erratic for the most part as well on top of a lot of grammatic errors. I feel as a first draft this has promise but needs to be restarted and thoroughly planned out along with a good editor. But as of it's current condition I can't keep reading the story. Best of luck to the author and editor.
Honestly this is one of the better original novels I’ve read on this app and I’ve read quite a bit. I think my most favorite part of this novel would be the facts that you learn from this novel as most of them are pretty accurate however the power system might change as I’m only on chapter 34. Overall the release rate is pretty good considering the content and story building. You can tell the author actually thinks and research’s stuff before he writes it down (he takes his time). Story building is great, but it can be improved slightly if he lets his readers gives some ideas to help improve it as a 2nd opinion would be great. 5/5 great novel.
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to put it simply this book is the perfect example of a very good concept completly destroyed by dreadful grammer and even horrible story progression..i understand the MC having an edge over everyone else becase of the scince from his old world helping him comprehend stuff better but all he seems to do is recitate facts like a bloody walking wikipedia and boom..he goes from mortal to demigod in THREE!. days.and even with all this knowledge he eventually used all his "prodigious insight" from his world to become the god of CHESS ..i stopped reading at that point....
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2 is a stretch to me. The direction of the story's quality saved it from being a 1. The grammar and writing quality butchered the novel. The novel had a good story with the laws and mc's character, but again the writing quality completely butchered the story. I am not expecting professional but it's worse than machine translations. You will need to reread and hope you understood it right to not be confused. (Some titles, names, and numbers are not consistent) and got switched which threw me off. Some facts are like copy and paste. Even more the novel was like random words to make the certain word count. The novel had potential but the writing quality discouraged me from continuing reading
grammar makes you want to vomit, main character personality is all over the place. (ie on earth he is a really nice man, like how he saved a female traveler at the start... later on when he gets stronger someone gets impaled by a water spear by their teacher in front of him because person offended him{person said get out of my chair or something equivalent} and he did not care at all.(there's so many more examples of this as well). the foundation of the story is unique, interesting and new I love the idea of growing by understanding the laws of the world, but author you need to improve before trying to write a concept like this, its too hard for someone of your skill level to try this
I think we should give a discount to the author in writing after all this is his first novel and I consider it cooler to watch the development of an author. My only request, or rather two, to the author in this humble review that our MC does not end up on top of the world like a virgin and that he avenges himself on NTR, thinking about three requests, I want vengeance for NTR at least I want the MC to show her what she has lost since she has already reached the Origin level.
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Its an interesting novel with a really good concept although there's a bit of grammar mistakes its because the author is from turkey i think
OMG... This novel a great bro😲😲 wuuuhh. It said " you must write one hundred forty character." Phaaa its idiot... OMG it said "Not yet." Who are you bitch computer??
I cant take this book seriously. so my man artic dies by helping a woman, sO what does he fucking do after his transmigiration?!?! Thats right! NOT ONLY HELP A FUVKING WOMAN, GOVE HER KNOWLEDGE. precious Knowledge that is literally how people gain power!!! Oh uea dont forget the fucking broken power system. the power system is based on “laws” which can give you numerous abilities given how knowledgable you are, so if you arent seeing the problem here ill tell you, THE KNOWLEDGE IS SHARABLE, IF THERES A SINGLE GOD OUT THERE THEN THE ENTIRE WORLD CAN BE INFESTED BY GODS. I mean sure there are law againts doing this, this is kept in order by the other gods but theres nothing they could do if someone decides to do this, well untill its too late atleast. what stopping a man from printing books and books of knowlede Of Laws that can help you become a god and spread them across the world?! By the time Anyone noticed itll be too fucking late. if iM to talk about charectors, all ill say is thier dogshit, plain, and unintresting im every way possible. Hell the main charector is pretty much a Robot whos knowledable in Random shiT, who Knows why. The typos In the bigining of the storys are inumarable and countless. this is not helped by the fact How author changes Names and titles every other fucking chapter for no absolutefucking reason. All in all I lost a few fucking iq points. i dont Want to put the author down in any way shape or form but All im saying is, its a intresting idea but The author stumbles on the execution terribly. this is for the first few cHapters btw, so no doubt the autho got as the chapters went but i Just cant stand the First 50.
What a man thinketh so is he!!! This man thought himself to Godhood and beyond with the help of his system snsnajanansnsnsnsnsnsnsnnnsnsnsns
Awful grammar, flat characters, cliche situations and encounters directly from xianxia, inconsistency everywhere. Most abilities are used once or NOT EVE ONCE before being not just forgotten, but deleted. After all the time spent reading their descriptions. First chapters is basically a wikipedia copypaste while later ones are simply not making sense. And the plot holes the size of a galaxy. Oh, and don't get me started about chess-related stuff. As a CM, I was cringing till I dropped despite previously wanting to check just how deep this rabbit hole is. I'm really wondering about those five star reviews through. Oh,and I judging by comment, negative reviews are deleted. Good job.
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