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The specific day was December twenty-fifth, or as it was more commonly known, Christmas Eve. Up until then, nothing out of the ordinary. It was just another festive day like any other in the Loud house, or at least that's what Lincoln Loud thought. After waking up from a terrible nightmare he had after sleeping for nearly ten hours (he died and didn't even know it), the white-haired boy entered the living room. But instead of finding his family gathered around a well-decorated Christmas tree full of presents, all he found were his parents and his sisters dead on the floor of the living room, their bodies all torn apart, as if a creature with sharp claws and teeth had committed that horrendous act. After running out of the house with a look of despair and tears on his face, wishing that it was all just a dream, all he saw was his neighborhood completely destroyed, with many trees around as if he were in a forest, and those creatures, small and hideous, green in color, attacking everyone they saw in front of them.
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After living through numerous adventures, saving countless lives, and experiencing several incestuous or non-incestuous romances, the young man, now in his 50s, reached a true impasse.
But when he was on the verge of death, something incredible and strange happened. Lincoln Loud not only went back in time to when he was still a child but also to a few days before all that shit happened. This time, will Lincoln, possessing his nearly 50 years of experience from the future, manage to prevent it from happening again, or will he lose his loved ones again?
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First of all I am not good at "Judging a fanfic but to give my whole honest opinion please do not feel offended" Writing quality - As a audioreader and as reader I could only say "mwuah" delicious, but there is a problem for me or someone like me because of the short and beautiful story I actually noticed it (I will use pages on mobile) that there are only 7 or more but that's fine if you can explain it why is that that's good to know if you don't want to add an extra work more words or chapters it's fine... I give this 4/5 good... Need more improvement on well the pages which is short... Story development (This is the part where character design and this combined) - all I could say is well "Wow!*Wink*noce" because well couldn't deny it but never expected Lincoln to be that guy or old man... And no he is still an old me if he came back in time... Any objections?! I wish I could talk more about it but maybe the author won't look at this so yeah... It a 5/5 if others see improvements take it or not that's improvement... Character development - as the story progresses we slowly know how Lincoln know secret of their family for not him as a kid but adopted and no sweethome alabama... And some other developments in the future... My rate is 5/5 satisfactory... Update stability - Now first of all it's very good, that you have a consistent two day update for readers such as my self not to wait for a very long time... And I have nothing to say actually it's good and not gonna lie I wish it was everyday but who would I complain for the author?! still I will give this a 4/5 good job... World background - in the latest chapters I would say it would slowly develop the dark areas of the story like what happened to the world after that so for now I was intentionally put this on 1/5 but for this it would be 5/5.... Overall 4.6 good and nice... If you guys have complains keep it to yourself and I forgot half of it so here is my gift for the author if you are reading this to the whole thing... My gift :
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